Competition

[Combustion kid]

a good one at that

[kataangaxk]

Heres the next part.
I didnt turn my back on Kataang if your wondering that. Im gonna end it Kataang.

Katara was walking back to her house when she bumped into Haru again.

“Hey Katara…” Haru said nervously. “I’m sorry about a while ago. I was just carried away in the moment. I just wanted you to know how I felt about you.”

Katara was now thinking of the opportunities she had. He can finally start a family. She can finally settle down. But there was one flaw in the whole plan. She didn’t love Haru. She loved him in a brotherly- sisterly way, but nothing more. She wasn’t sure if she could say “no” to him. She then remembered Aang was gone for 2 and half years. He could be kidnapped, injured, captured, or even… dead. This could be her last chance. She then heard Haru mumbling something.

“What was that?”

“Umm… I just said that I would be delighted if you came with me to the new moon celebration next week.”

Katara decided she needed to have a life of her own. She couldn’t just wait for someone… someone that might be dead.

“Sure, I go with you.” Katara said uneasily.

A huge smile spread across Haru’s face.

“That’s great!” he exclaimed. “I’ll see you next week then.”

“Yeah… next week…”

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“Toph please let me in.” Sokka shouted. “I’m sorry, I really am.”

“Save it for Suki, I mean whoops, Yue!” Toph yelled back.

“I can explain. Please, please…” Sokka was in tears.

Toph could sense his desperation and sorrow. She felt Sokka drop to his knees.

“Fine, I’ll hear what you have to say.” Toph said, now much calmer.

Sokka then repeated exactly what he said to Katara. When he commented that he wasn’t good enough for her, she bluntly replied “Your damn right”, but Sokka didn’t take notice as he continued his pleas to calm Toph down, and to make her love him again.

After he had finished his whole rant, Toph paused for a second then she spoke, “What you said makes sense and all but, you said you would spend all eternity with me, love me, and cherish me. You certainly didn’t show it today.” Toph said in tears.

“I’ll forgive you though only for the time being.” Toph stammered.

Those words were like music to Sokka’s ears. He quickly ran up to her and hugged her. Then without warning Sokka lurched forward and gave Toph a soft but passionate kiss.

Should I make more Tokka problems?

[waterbender111]

oh go on im interested now plz

[kataang]

Love the story, I really don't like the haru and katara kind of thing, but when you say it will end up with kataang, than it's OK. No, the haru + katara thing is cute, and confusing for the kataangers.
Please post the next part!

[waterbender111]

kataang said:

Love the story, I really don't like the haru and katara kind of thing, but when you say it will end up with kataang, than it's OK. No, the haru + katara thing is cute, and confusing for the kataangers.
Please post the next part!

i agree

[Kelly]

When is the next part come?

[kataangaxk]

This is part of the trip to the north pole for the new moon celebration. I think i put that they were in Ba Sing Se right? Ok. Im not sure how to end it Kataang but I will. I either have to make Haruu die or make Haru turn out to be a total A**hole. I dont know if I want to do either of them. So, im still thinking. This will probably go into 10,000... 15,000 words. I dont now.

6 days later…
Katara, Haru, Sokka, and Toph were all prepared to board the train to the docks. They were going to take a ferry to the North Pole for the New Moon Celebration.
“Sokka, do I have to go? I hate not being able to see!” Toph complained.
“You don’t have to, but I would really enjoy your company there.” Sokka said, trying not to make it seem as if he were forcing her to go.
“Oh alright, I’ll go.” Toph said in defeat.
They showed the lady at the front desk their passports and they all boarded the train. Toph grabbed Katara and brought her to the back of the train.
“Why are you taking me here?” Katara asked in confusion.
“I Just wanted to talk to you.” A huge grin spread across Toph’s face. “So sugar queen, got yourself a boyfriend?”
Katara looked down as her face colored. Thank God Toph can’t see me, Katara thought to herself.
“No were just friends. He just asked me if I wanted to go to the New Moon Celebration with him. He’s not my boyfriend.” Katara replied.
“I can tell your lying…” Toph said slyly.
“Ughh” Katara quickened her pace and walked back to Haru and Sokka. They were apparently talking about which martial arts form is better, “Boomerang Fu” or Earthbending.
“Hey Katara, where did you go?” Haru asked.
“I was just talking to Toph.” Katara replied.
Katara then heard Toph yell “yeaaaah, Katara’s got herself a boyfriend.”
Katara and Haru filled with color and stared down.
“Katara you have a boyfriend?” Sokka asked oblivious that it was Haru. “Tell me who it is so I can blow his face off.”
“Sokka, I’m 17 already.”
“Is he a bender? Is he from our tribe?” Sokka asked.
“He’s a bender alright. He’s also umm… really close to you right now.” Katara replied.
“A bender, really close to me, who is it?” Sokka asked furiously. Katara and Haru started laughing at Sokka’s undetective- like skills.
The train suddenly came to a stop.
Then the conductor yelled “We have arrived at Crescent Moon Bay! Please exit the Train please!”
Toph, Katara, and Haru all walked out of the train with Sokka trailing behind them, still trying to figure out whom Katara’s boyfriend was.
“Zuko, Aang, IROH?” Sokka mumbled to himself.
“Where are your passports?” The lady asked.
“I think this will do.” Toph said as she gave the lady her passport.
“Ahh you are from the Bei Fong Family… THIS IS WORTHLESS” The lady yelled to everyone’s surprise.
“The Bei Fong family was killed when the rebels attacked the city.” The lady yelled with no compassion in her voice.
Toph’s whole world seemed to shatter into pieces.
NO THIS COULDN’T HAVE HAPPENED, IT COULDN’T, Toph thought to herself.
“M-My parents are dead…” Toph whispered.
“Parents? The Bei Fong family said they had no children.”

[nicole0deon]

thats like the exact oppostite as in the serpants pass. but i like it better this way. i love your stories. pretty please go on? lol no pressure though ;D

[Kelly]

Suspence... can't wait for the next part!!

[xxtophfanxx]

come on you've got to finnish it. it's so good, i like oll of the twists.

[sokka118]

I'd like more description when it comes to the characters thoughts. It all seems really rushed. It's a good plot though so yeah, keep it up.

[katara279momo]

oh man keep it going i want to know whats going to happen please

this is a GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Lolly]

AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!! WHERE'S THE REST OF IT? must read more!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! BEST IVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KEEP GOING WATEVER YOU DO DONT STOP!!!!!!!!!!!

[Dogg450]

I agree with lolly

[imabigfanofiroh]

It was really good.