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Post by Teяa253 on May 2, 2008 16:37:43 GMT 1
maaayybee..... ~Azula~
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Orophin
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Post by Orophin on May 3, 2008 11:21:07 GMT 1
Lol.
So, are we getting another Korotu story, Reaperz?
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Post by Teяa253 on May 3, 2008 19:24:28 GMT 1
perhaps another Korotu pic? ~Sokka~
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Post by Orophin on May 4, 2008 0:09:12 GMT 1
Or, both. Lol.
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Post by Teяa253 on May 4, 2008 0:55:05 GMT 1
yeah, lol. luckily I'm almost done with the Fight Club icons. then I'll be able to put up my new rounds. ~Toph~
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Post by Orophin on May 4, 2008 1:24:24 GMT 1
Woo! Icons and rounds!
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Post by Teяa253 on May 4, 2008 1:37:08 GMT 1
ya. working on Sokka right now... ~Ty Lee~
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Reaperz
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Post by Reaperz on May 4, 2008 1:41:27 GMT 1
Sorry to say if forgot about working on a chapter today lol so ill prob work on one tonight and tomorrow
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Post by Teяa253 on May 4, 2008 2:33:52 GMT 1
nice. ~Ty Lee~
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Post by Reaperz on May 4, 2008 7:56:03 GMT 1
Well i know you all have waited a while for this lol,but here is the next chapter for my fanfic.
Secrets Reveiled
I can’t believe what I had just heard from my father, I didn’t it was true and I didn’t want my family to be hurt all because my greedy uncle can’t get what he wants. My father sat there speechless I think he was waiting for me to say something but I was still trying to let it all sink in. My father had just told me “Son please listen to me; don’t say anything until I finish.” The only thing I did right then was nod I mean come on I was only 14 then and I knew better then to disobey him even if he was chained down. Well back to what my father was saying “Your mother and I are not just regular people Korotu; we are part of an ancient group formed to protect a very powerful item. The reason you are here is because you are the future guardian of this item and of its increasing powers. You are the only one who is able to get to the final piece that your uncle Adrian Sarantos is willing to kill us all just to have.”
While this was still trying to sink in I heard my uncle’s voice behind me saying “You see my dear dear nephew I already have three of the pieces of this artifact in my grasp and you are the only person in my way of getting the final one. That is why I am going to make a deal with you. As you know your father is locked up over there, but what you don’t know is that I also have your mother in another room. If you answer yes to my deal I will unchain both of your parents and they will stay here with me as guest, but they will not be able to leave. I will give you four years to get me this item because at this age you are not ready to get it yet. Four years may be long but I can wait for you to get older. By your 18th birthday if you have obtained it and have brought it to me I will let you leave with your parents and I will never bother you or your parents again, but if you have not obtained the final piece or have not brought it here I will have them both killed and find another way to make you do my bidding.
At that moment a young girl walked in and whispered something to my uncle, from the way she was looked and dressed I guessed she was from the Fire nation and she might be about a year younger then me. My uncle nodded and walked towards me. “Korotu I would like you to meet your cousin, Caitlin Sarantos. She then took a few steps forward and bowed to me. My uncle then whispered something to her and she left. Sorry about that interruption lets get back to what I was talking to you about. I will give you these few years to learn about this item and to train your skills because you will need them to get it. I will now have a guard take you to another room where you can think about what you will do. He then steps out of the room and two guards come in, one takes the body of the guard that was shot down by my uncle and the other led me to a room a few halls down from where I was held when I first got here.
When I got to the room the guard told me that my uncle will be here within the hour to find out my answer. As I walked in I noticed a bed across the room, and that someone was laying in it. I didn’t say anything because I wanted to see who was in the bed first, but of course the guard outside the door slammed it shut which caused the person to slowly sit up. At first I was afraid but once I saw who it was I was very happy. Right then I yelled “Mother!” And I ran over to the bed. She seemed to be in shock that I was here but after I explained that I knew the reason that they were all here she seemed to calm down. After a few minutes me telling her that I knew about me being the guardian and every thing I noticed that there was a chain going from the wall to the bed. She was chained there and since she wasn’t a bender it wasn’t like she could have escaped. After she asked why I had a rag looking thing tied to my face and I had explained all of that to her she also just like my father told me not to talk until she had finished. She started saying “I am sorry my son that you had to be pulled into this at such a young age but I need to tell you more about this piece of the artifact that your father and I have been protecting. “Its name is the Gauntlet of elements and your uncle has most of it, the person that wears this gauntlet will have the ability to bend any element he chooses and that person will have the bending powers of the avatar in the avatar state. But in order to be able to make it fully work, you must have all the elemental crests. Your uncle has 3 of the elemental crest and the gauntlet but he is missing the final piece. That piece is the Water crest. The only person able to enter the temple that it is hidden in is you. If anyone else tries they will parish and the temple will be destroyed. That is why your uncle is trying to get you to work with him but listen to me what ever you do you can not let him get the last piece, you may be young but please listen to me you have to kill your uncle before he is able to form the whole gauntlet.”
So tell me what you think.
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Post by Teяa253 on May 4, 2008 8:02:43 GMT 1
it explains a lot... ~Katara~
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Post by Reaperz on May 4, 2008 8:05:55 GMT 1
well i tried to explain more lol...i guess thats just how i am...but is that a good thing or a bad thing?
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Post by Teяa253 on May 4, 2008 8:09:16 GMT 1
it's good. the more detail you have the better. ~Iroh~
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Post by Orophin on May 4, 2008 9:08:12 GMT 1
Yeah, without detail, a story seems less... real.
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Post by Teяa253 on May 4, 2008 9:23:34 GMT 1
and it'll usually suck, to be very blunt. ~Sanaki~
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