Is your character a Mary Sue?

[Teяa253]

there's actually two barriers which were passed.
the other one was that list.
~Toph~

[justafan]

so its the eight from the link plus whats on the front page, right?

[Teяa253]

pretty much...
and usually if people say something seems Mary Sue-ish, they're usually (not always, usually) right.


again, not pointing fingers, just increasing the accuracy of the Mary Sue guide.
~Iroh~

[justafan]

well there is 4 more now, so thats a grand total of 12

[justafan]

1. They can bend more than one element without being the avatar: NO
2. They have a huge, distinct scar: YES
3. They are related to Aang, Zuko, Katara and Sokka, or Toph.: NO
4. They have a hair color other than brown, black, or gray.*: NO
5. They do not have a hair color that matches their nation. (Black - Fire Nation, Brown - Water Tribes, Brown - Earth Kingdom): NO
5. They have an eye color that has not appeared in the show. (Purple, silver, black, red.)*:YES
6. They have an eye color that does not match their nation. (Gold/amber/brown - Fire Nation, Shades of Brown - Earth Kingdom, Blue - Water Tribes.): YES
7. They can bend elements that have not appeared in the show or are a part of another element. (Heart, love, shadow, blood, plants, ice, sky, sun, beauty, mood, the color orange.)NO
10. They hold a high military position and they're less than 20.: YES/NO (I will count it though)
13. They wear modern clothing.: NO
14. Their name is not Asian-based. **: CAN'T JUDGE, But i say that it is
15. Their hair or eye color changes. (Usually based on mood, but dyes count as well. Dyes are a very expensive and meticulous science.): NO
16. They're extremely beautiful/handsome and people fall in love with them left and right.: NO
17. They are an expert and cold-hearted killer/assassin and they are younger than 25 years of age.:NO
18. They have experienced death in any way and show no psychological repercussions.: NO

[Teяa253]

incidentally, that site where I took that quiz said your character was an automatic Mary Sue if you had even one of those traits (which means they are to be avoided)

luckily I'm much more lenient. lol *winks*
~Azula~

[justafan]

I took it and only got 8, guess we took it different, lol

[Teяa253]

(talking about the 2nd part--that list with the 18 points)
~Toph~

[justafan]

how did you get a gary sue out of that? lol

[Teяa253]

(like I said, any time one of those conditions are met, the site said you were an automatic Mary Sue/Gary Stu. and, I also said that I was lenient luckily.)

besides, it was Drizzt that first said he was an MS, so perhaps talk to him about it?
~Katara~

[justafan]

I think that because my eye has a small band of red is a dumb reason to say that dre yu is a Gary Stu, o well

[Teяa253]

I already said that you should take it up with Driizt. he was the one who first said it... I merely nodded.
~Toph~

[justafan]

kk, i'll pm him

changed my mind, unless he doesn't accept dre yu, then i guess there is no reason to even think it, i can always use another of my 5 people anyways

[Teяa253]

generally, a rule of thumb is if it's nto a trait you'd see in either a regular human or in the avatar world, chances are it's something tha does not belong.
~Iroh~

[Orophin]

Wow, I took the test for my latest character, and she scored 4-5... guess that means she is in no way gonna be too superior.

Although, she has a superiority complex, so she might think she's superior...