Post by Teяa253 on Dec 29, 2008 3:17:04 GMT 1
I actually finished this 59th chapter earlier today, but for various reasons I was unable to post it till now.
there's an explicit version for this (violence and suggestive themes) and lots of Cheng and Taki ownage. ^^
and I find the ending for this one as very funny. oh, and chances are that chapter 60 will reveal The Dark Warrior. if not, then chapter 61. it depends on how much I elaborate on certain upcoming events.
CHAPTER 59: A BLOW TO THEIR PRIDE
“So you two think you can actually challenge an entire army,” the Kyoshi leader exclaimed, “look at you two; there’s just no way that that’s going to happen.”
“except,” said Taki, “not only is it going to happen, but we’re going to get out of here alive, since unlike all of you blokes, we’ve actually had decent training. I’ll personally make sure I cut your little frame into pieces myself, girl.”
“Well; well; well;” said the Kyoshi Warrior leader, finally able to connect where she had seen Taki’s face before, “if it isn’t our old friend Taki Masahiro; we wondered where you ran off to.”
“That’s Taki Alesha to you, girl,” Taki replied with a witty tone, “You see, I actually have life skills to. I was able to find myself a man.”
“So we gathered,” said a male voice; they turned slightly to see that it was the leader of the Fire Soldier division;
“Alesha,” he exclaimed, “Cheng Alesha: the man who betrayed us as well; Wow; traitor and traitor attract, huh?”
“Precisely,” Cheng replied proudly, “we decided to betray The Order because we know which side is going to win the war; and it certainly isn’t The Order if they have losers like you two commanding their armies.”
“Cheng Alesha and Taki Masahiro,” the man replied, laughing again, “and so I suppose little miss avatar taught you a thing or two?”
“More than that,” Taki replied, “she taught us how to get a life. That’s why we’re married and you’re not.”
“It’s also why we’re going to be alive after this is all said and done and you’re not,” Cheng added, and the two of them leered.
The Kyoshi Warrior aimed a blow at Taki, but Taki’s reflexes were too quick, and she ducked.
“Ready when you are,” said Cheng to his enemies, but he was actually talking to Taki, who caught his gist and nodded. They both jumped up and hit the ground, Cheng sending a huge blast of flame outwards and Taki sending out a fault line, which blasted a hole in the enemy ranks. Using this to their advantage, Cheng and Taki tore past them in an attempt to put some distance between them.
This was going to be a game of hide-and-seek-and-snipe if things went the way Cheng and Taki hoped. Luckily, both of them were swift, lithe, and nimble, for they did not have as much clothing, let alone armor, as the Fire Nation and Kyoshi Warriors, who were dressed in the thick clothing of their uniforms. They took off into the trees, neither one letting the other out of his or her sight.
From The Order’s point of view, Cheng and Taki had all but disappeared. Naturally, they split into decent-sized groups and spread out to cover more ground, generally throwing attacks out whenever they thought they saw something move.
Cheng and Taki had retreated into a tree by this time, though they wished that they could have had a little more to cover themselves with; be it more clothing or some armor. Nevertheless, they were getting passed by, and so they smirked.
“Shall we,” Taki whispered, looking at Cheng
“Aye,” Cheng replied, and made a fireball on his hand, which she shaped into something thin and sharp. Taki jerked her hand upward, bringing a rock in the form of several knives up. They were going to snipe their enemies from their location until they noticed.
The Order of the Avatar Slayer might have heavily outnumbered The Avatar Guard, but compared to the experience that some of the veteran members of The Avatar Guard had, The Order were simply amateurs. Additionally, those who were able to join The Avatar Guard’s core force had become very powerful because of the training that they were able to put themselves through, since they had The Four Benders, who were always willing to teach anyone something new.
Cheng and Taki were able to direct their projectiles in such a manner that it made them look like they were coming from all sides. Nonetheless, eventually they were found, and so they jumped. Water, earth and fire from The Order’s armies and attacks came out flying at them, and they had to jump, flip, dodge, or out-bend their enemies to avoid taking a hit, something that they had both so far been successful at doing.
[The Kyoshi Warriors were sometimes benders as well, and had all nationalities (The Avatar Guard had a few airbending Kyoshi Warriors, but since the Air Nomads had chosen to stay out of the war as much as possible, these were rare), and so to see a Kyoshi Warrior who was a waterbender, and earthbender or a firebender was not uncommon.]
Cheng and Taki seemed to complement each other when it came to their fighting styles. It might have been because they always trained together, and learned to play off of each other’s moves, but whatever it was, it was proving to be effective against the much less experienced Fire Nation Soldiers and Kyoshi Warriors. They both may not have been very high-ranked by official standards and ranks, but they were among some of the best fighters of their kind.
Cheng and Taki were both on a roll, though they figured that by now they were lost, as they had no idea where their camp was. Every time an attack was thrown at them, they countered it, as countering had become their specialty. This was also why they were the ones to flee, and the ones to take the defensive.
The enemy soldiers, most of which just seemed like people The Order had recruited by telling them to join the war, were not aware of their destructive skills until too late. This only intensified after Cheng and Taki were able to respectively get hold of a steel sword and a pair of brass Kyoshi fans. Taki smirked, and as they waited to be found again, she began sharpening the fans she had found even more than they were. They weren’t as razor-sharp as hers were, and the sword the Cheng got was not as sharp as the one he had, but they improvised nonetheless.
“Play time’s over,” they both said simultaneously, jumping out right as they were about to be seen anyways. Brandishing their weapons, they charged, also shooting rocks and flames in every direction with no regard to what they were hitting. Having no other allies except each other had that one advantage.
They had taken the offensive, since with the combined might of their now excellent bending skills and their already incredible weapon skills, The Order’s armies were no match. Granted, these were not the best armies The Order had, [they were about average] but the fact that these two elite warriors were holding their ground was amazing.
They eventually killed off enough of them that they began to retreat. Cheng and Taki’s new targets were the Fire Soldier leader and the Kyoshi leader respectively. They eventually came across them, as they had been looking for Cheng and Taki as well.
“Well,” said Taki, giggling, “it’s just us now. Shall we dance?”
These two were much more experienced than their soldiers, but Cheng and Taki still outdid them. Their constant leering and positive, calm attitudes helped anger their opponents, who began strategizing less and trying to go berserk more.
Fire and earth was flying both ways, Cheng and Taki frantically but cheerily dodging them or trying to counter the attacks. When all was said and done, Taki suddenly spun around and using the brass Kyoshi fans she had acquired and one swift fell stroke from them, she had removed the head of her enemy.
Cheng, Taki, and the Fire Solider leader all stopped and looked. However, in that split-second of pausing, Cheng spun his sword and around and whacked off the head of his enemy as well.
“Well,” he said, “I guess that’s that. Let’s go find our stuff.”
“Alright then,” Taki replied, taking Cheng’s hand. Neither of them had taken any blows, and they had killed a good couple hundred or so enemies. They cleaned the blood off them selves in a nearby stream and then made their way back to their camp, which they eventually found.
Back at the base a day or two later, Zakura was reading a central Earth Kingdom war report to herself when she suddenly burst out laughing hysterically.
“What’s the matter,” Iresu, Zeruda, and Tenoko asked her, all of whom had been nearby and wondered why a war report made her laugh.
“Get this,” said Zakura, reading aloud, “according to our Zuroc Sensei near the small village west of Fengtai; they report that The Order reports losing over half of the their 84th and 106th divisions to a strange couple running around in their underthings. This couple was identified as the Order traitors Cheng Alesha and Taki Masahiro, who apparently are now married.”
This even got Iresu and Zeruda laughing. Granted, only Zakura knew even half of what Cheng and Taki did during their alone time, but everyone in the base knew that they were crazy for each other, and that finding them in their underthings should a person barge into their room would not be an uncommon occurrence.
“Ha-ha,” Tenoko said, also laughing hysterically, “That was probably one heck of a humiliating defeat for The Order. I mean: to lose almost 2 whole divisions of their armies to a crazy skin-showing couple like them; that’s gotta be a serious blow to their pride.”
“You know it,” Zakura replied, also laughing, “maybe that was why I was so interested in them... they must have complemented each other well, like they did when they trained. Still, that sucks for The Order. That had to have been one heck of A Blow To their Pride.”
~Azula~
there's an explicit version for this (violence and suggestive themes) and lots of Cheng and Taki ownage. ^^
and I find the ending for this one as very funny. oh, and chances are that chapter 60 will reveal The Dark Warrior. if not, then chapter 61. it depends on how much I elaborate on certain upcoming events.
CHAPTER 59: A BLOW TO THEIR PRIDE
“So you two think you can actually challenge an entire army,” the Kyoshi leader exclaimed, “look at you two; there’s just no way that that’s going to happen.”
“except,” said Taki, “not only is it going to happen, but we’re going to get out of here alive, since unlike all of you blokes, we’ve actually had decent training. I’ll personally make sure I cut your little frame into pieces myself, girl.”
“Well; well; well;” said the Kyoshi Warrior leader, finally able to connect where she had seen Taki’s face before, “if it isn’t our old friend Taki Masahiro; we wondered where you ran off to.”
“That’s Taki Alesha to you, girl,” Taki replied with a witty tone, “You see, I actually have life skills to. I was able to find myself a man.”
“So we gathered,” said a male voice; they turned slightly to see that it was the leader of the Fire Soldier division;
“Alesha,” he exclaimed, “Cheng Alesha: the man who betrayed us as well; Wow; traitor and traitor attract, huh?”
“Precisely,” Cheng replied proudly, “we decided to betray The Order because we know which side is going to win the war; and it certainly isn’t The Order if they have losers like you two commanding their armies.”
“Cheng Alesha and Taki Masahiro,” the man replied, laughing again, “and so I suppose little miss avatar taught you a thing or two?”
“More than that,” Taki replied, “she taught us how to get a life. That’s why we’re married and you’re not.”
“It’s also why we’re going to be alive after this is all said and done and you’re not,” Cheng added, and the two of them leered.
The Kyoshi Warrior aimed a blow at Taki, but Taki’s reflexes were too quick, and she ducked.
“Ready when you are,” said Cheng to his enemies, but he was actually talking to Taki, who caught his gist and nodded. They both jumped up and hit the ground, Cheng sending a huge blast of flame outwards and Taki sending out a fault line, which blasted a hole in the enemy ranks. Using this to their advantage, Cheng and Taki tore past them in an attempt to put some distance between them.
This was going to be a game of hide-and-seek-and-snipe if things went the way Cheng and Taki hoped. Luckily, both of them were swift, lithe, and nimble, for they did not have as much clothing, let alone armor, as the Fire Nation and Kyoshi Warriors, who were dressed in the thick clothing of their uniforms. They took off into the trees, neither one letting the other out of his or her sight.
From The Order’s point of view, Cheng and Taki had all but disappeared. Naturally, they split into decent-sized groups and spread out to cover more ground, generally throwing attacks out whenever they thought they saw something move.
Cheng and Taki had retreated into a tree by this time, though they wished that they could have had a little more to cover themselves with; be it more clothing or some armor. Nevertheless, they were getting passed by, and so they smirked.
“Shall we,” Taki whispered, looking at Cheng
“Aye,” Cheng replied, and made a fireball on his hand, which she shaped into something thin and sharp. Taki jerked her hand upward, bringing a rock in the form of several knives up. They were going to snipe their enemies from their location until they noticed.
The Order of the Avatar Slayer might have heavily outnumbered The Avatar Guard, but compared to the experience that some of the veteran members of The Avatar Guard had, The Order were simply amateurs. Additionally, those who were able to join The Avatar Guard’s core force had become very powerful because of the training that they were able to put themselves through, since they had The Four Benders, who were always willing to teach anyone something new.
Cheng and Taki were able to direct their projectiles in such a manner that it made them look like they were coming from all sides. Nonetheless, eventually they were found, and so they jumped. Water, earth and fire from The Order’s armies and attacks came out flying at them, and they had to jump, flip, dodge, or out-bend their enemies to avoid taking a hit, something that they had both so far been successful at doing.
[The Kyoshi Warriors were sometimes benders as well, and had all nationalities (The Avatar Guard had a few airbending Kyoshi Warriors, but since the Air Nomads had chosen to stay out of the war as much as possible, these were rare), and so to see a Kyoshi Warrior who was a waterbender, and earthbender or a firebender was not uncommon.]
Cheng and Taki seemed to complement each other when it came to their fighting styles. It might have been because they always trained together, and learned to play off of each other’s moves, but whatever it was, it was proving to be effective against the much less experienced Fire Nation Soldiers and Kyoshi Warriors. They both may not have been very high-ranked by official standards and ranks, but they were among some of the best fighters of their kind.
Cheng and Taki were both on a roll, though they figured that by now they were lost, as they had no idea where their camp was. Every time an attack was thrown at them, they countered it, as countering had become their specialty. This was also why they were the ones to flee, and the ones to take the defensive.
The enemy soldiers, most of which just seemed like people The Order had recruited by telling them to join the war, were not aware of their destructive skills until too late. This only intensified after Cheng and Taki were able to respectively get hold of a steel sword and a pair of brass Kyoshi fans. Taki smirked, and as they waited to be found again, she began sharpening the fans she had found even more than they were. They weren’t as razor-sharp as hers were, and the sword the Cheng got was not as sharp as the one he had, but they improvised nonetheless.
“Play time’s over,” they both said simultaneously, jumping out right as they were about to be seen anyways. Brandishing their weapons, they charged, also shooting rocks and flames in every direction with no regard to what they were hitting. Having no other allies except each other had that one advantage.
They had taken the offensive, since with the combined might of their now excellent bending skills and their already incredible weapon skills, The Order’s armies were no match. Granted, these were not the best armies The Order had, [they were about average] but the fact that these two elite warriors were holding their ground was amazing.
They eventually killed off enough of them that they began to retreat. Cheng and Taki’s new targets were the Fire Soldier leader and the Kyoshi leader respectively. They eventually came across them, as they had been looking for Cheng and Taki as well.
“Well,” said Taki, giggling, “it’s just us now. Shall we dance?”
These two were much more experienced than their soldiers, but Cheng and Taki still outdid them. Their constant leering and positive, calm attitudes helped anger their opponents, who began strategizing less and trying to go berserk more.
Fire and earth was flying both ways, Cheng and Taki frantically but cheerily dodging them or trying to counter the attacks. When all was said and done, Taki suddenly spun around and using the brass Kyoshi fans she had acquired and one swift fell stroke from them, she had removed the head of her enemy.
Cheng, Taki, and the Fire Solider leader all stopped and looked. However, in that split-second of pausing, Cheng spun his sword and around and whacked off the head of his enemy as well.
“Well,” he said, “I guess that’s that. Let’s go find our stuff.”
“Alright then,” Taki replied, taking Cheng’s hand. Neither of them had taken any blows, and they had killed a good couple hundred or so enemies. They cleaned the blood off them selves in a nearby stream and then made their way back to their camp, which they eventually found.
Back at the base a day or two later, Zakura was reading a central Earth Kingdom war report to herself when she suddenly burst out laughing hysterically.
“What’s the matter,” Iresu, Zeruda, and Tenoko asked her, all of whom had been nearby and wondered why a war report made her laugh.
“Get this,” said Zakura, reading aloud, “according to our Zuroc Sensei near the small village west of Fengtai; they report that The Order reports losing over half of the their 84th and 106th divisions to a strange couple running around in their underthings. This couple was identified as the Order traitors Cheng Alesha and Taki Masahiro, who apparently are now married.”
This even got Iresu and Zeruda laughing. Granted, only Zakura knew even half of what Cheng and Taki did during their alone time, but everyone in the base knew that they were crazy for each other, and that finding them in their underthings should a person barge into their room would not be an uncommon occurrence.
“Ha-ha,” Tenoko said, also laughing hysterically, “That was probably one heck of a humiliating defeat for The Order. I mean: to lose almost 2 whole divisions of their armies to a crazy skin-showing couple like them; that’s gotta be a serious blow to their pride.”
“You know it,” Zakura replied, also laughing, “maybe that was why I was so interested in them... they must have complemented each other well, like they did when they trained. Still, that sucks for The Order. That had to have been one heck of A Blow To their Pride.”
~Azula~
