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Post by kataangaxk on Dec 5, 2007 3:41:27 GMT 1
Very short and vague i know. I didnt want to get caught. Ill write more sooon.
“We’ve got to get Teo back.” Aang said as he jumped on Appa. Katara and Toph had already jumped on Appa but the others stayed where they were. “What are you guys waiting for?” Aang Asked. “We are just a few teenagers. How are we going to infiltrate the Fire Nation?!?” Sokka said defiantly. “I already left people behind in the Fire Nation. I won’t do it again” Aang replied. “I’m in.” Zuko said. “I guess I have no other choice then…” Sokka said pessimistically. “What about you Lin?” Aang asked. “I think I’ll stay here. I want to learn more about my culture.” Lin replied “Are you sure?” Aang asked. “Positive.” Lin replied “Ok then, everyone else get on board, were going to save Teo.” Aang said. “Yip yip” Aang shouted. Appa’s back lurched up and he soared into the sky. Following the Azula’s ship.
Azula’s Ship
“Princess, the avatar is apparently following us. What should we do?” The soldier asked. “Let them follow us. Let them come to their own demise.”
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ZIE
Master firebender
ONOEZ!!!!
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Post by ZIE on Dec 5, 2007 12:18:36 GMT 1
ooo clifhanger
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Kelly
Waterbender
GO TOKKA
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Post by Kelly on Dec 5, 2007 20:55:47 GMT 1
kool
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Post by Roku the Great on Dec 5, 2007 21:01:26 GMT 1
not bad , but as you said, you should write more soon.
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roku
Master airbender
water rules
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Post by roku on Dec 14, 2007 19:52:42 GMT 1
you should write more you got me all interested MMMMMMMMMMMM
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Post by the new and improved roku14 on Dec 14, 2007 21:45:59 GMT 1
very good
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the airbender
Discovered avatar
-It was bitterwork, but the results were worthy- Roku
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Post by the airbender on Dec 15, 2007 17:27:22 GMT 1
u should continue soon
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Kelly
Waterbender
GO TOKKA
Posts: 276
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Post by Kelly on Dec 15, 2007 23:24:07 GMT 1
are you going to do a fanfic about every new episode coming out?
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Post by kataangaxk on Dec 17, 2007 18:24:18 GMT 1
uhh yeah i am but i have a lot of vacation homework to deal with. Ughh.
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Post by nicole0deon on Dec 18, 2007 1:11:58 GMT 1
i have major respect for anyone who does fanfiction. i tried writing one. its hard! but anyway i'm gonna bookmark your thread. you've got me hooked!
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Jan 20, 2008 5:47:46 GMT 1
nice continue on.
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Lolly
Skilled airbender
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Post by Lolly on Feb 10, 2008 23:26:40 GMT 1
LOVED IT! WRITE MORE.
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