The second

[mastermomo12]

It was so very dark. Small little house like bunkers in the temple were the houses.It felt impossible for it to storm. In one small bunker, there were three people. Me, Aang, and Cho ne. I sitting on my hammock and was thinking about life. I always thinks about the big questions at night. Cho ne was snoring like a moose-lion. I kicked his hammock and all he did was snore louder. I looked over at Aang. He was asleep. I rolled over in my hammock. I looked back at the guys. Or should i say guy. Cho ne was still there, but Aang was gone! In his place was a piece of parchment. I silently jumped out of my hammock, and walked out the slide doors. It was strangely hot and humid, but i didn't care. I ran around the bunker, but saw no one. I ran back inside, grabbed my glider, and ran back to the rest area for the bisons. All but Appa were there. Suddenly I saw a bison in the sky. I jumped in the air, shook it out and flew after the bison. My thoughts were correct. It was Appa, and Aang on him. Suddenly, the wind decided to act up. It was Reilly hard, but Finlay I could grab Appas hair. But then we crashed. My lungs suddenly were crushed by the water. I forced myself to open my eyes and i saw Aang. He was sinking, so I swam after him but suddenly my hands were in ice. It took me a few seconds to realize that it was Aang. The last thing i saw was Appa, and Aang, covered in ice.

[Combustion kid]

nice its a good start

[mastermomo12]

The first think i noticed was the cold. Am I dead? Can you feel things jabbing in you when your dead? Hmm, I guess I'm not dead then. I tried looking around. Everything was black! I got scared for a second, but then i realized that i forgot to open my eyes. I was shocked at what I saw. It was daylight, with ice all around. The sky was cloudless, and even though the sun was shining on me, I was cold as the ice I was standing on. For a few moments, I was wondering how i got here. Then I remembered. Aang had been upset for the fact he was the avatar. I'm guessing he ran away because of that. Then he got really scary. He glowed and then ice surrounded him and me. Ugh, my head hurts. About a few inch's away was my glider."Ugh, I hate my life." I jumped, wiped out the glider, and began my search for land.

[Kelly]

who are you???

[mastermomo12]

and one more thing. Im makein really bad names up so if you have future people like merchents and stuff pm me some names and charectars you want in the story. this story is about a friend of Aangs who got caught in the iceberg with him.

[mastermomo12]

I wonder were I am. I think I'm near the northern water tribe. But then it could be the southern. It took me about an hour but i found out were i was."THE SOUTHERN WATER TRIBE!" That had to be impossible. How far did that ice i was in travel? And wheres Aang? He should been in the ice to. Wait, there were cracks in the ice when i looked. They must have gotten free. Weird, I swear i could hear a bison. I flew down to the village and realized its a lot smaller then the way the monks described it. Why are people stareing at me."Uhh, hello fellow people. I need to use your bathroom." They looked at me as if i was a nut job."Ahh!"I realized i had been hit by a snowball and i looked around. All the children had either ice or snow, and then decided to pelt me with it. I dogeded them and screaming, i took off. So much for being friendly. I noticed something weird on my head. I had felt it all day. I guessed it was snow. I tried to brush it of, then i realized it was hair. I kept screaming until i say the bison. I also saw Aang, and knew that i had found him.

[mastermomo12]

I still belive that the air here is very dusty. Im in a small village on an island just a few clicks from Ba Sing Se. I rent a small little house and useing the rest of the 100 gold pieces i won in a bet, i bought some food. I had decided to leave Aang and Appa to go on their path, while i decided to look for info about how the world is. It appears that 100 years had past and the firenation turned into a bunch of sychopathic nutjobs wanting to rule the world. I think i should go and practice airbending for a bit.I walked outside and started down the path when i heard screaming and a few earth nation souldiers ran to the gate."Whats happening? Firenation are comeing!" Why would they come so far south?"Whats your name kid? Lee. Well then grab a weapon and help us defend ourselves. I ran for my glider, and i jumped onto the nearest roof(I fell through my own). I looked around and then i saw them. About 11 troops on rhinos. Suddnly everything was on fire. The roof i was on exploded and i fell into a tin tub. I looked around and saw a window. Running to it i saw the whole village on fire. I suddnly got very mad. Twirling my glider, i lashed out with it and sending a gust of air, I knocked the first troop of his rhino. I ran out side and saw that the earth soldiers were fighting only 3 rhinos. Suddnly I saw a rhino come out and the troop grabbed a sword, and aiming for a mother and child. I jumped and smacked the soldier right were his spine should connect to his neck. The rhino went crazy and the rider was limp. A sudden pain was in my head. Every thing went dizzy and i fell,and everything went black.



I was in a hurry so i couldnt check spelling or get things correct.

[nicole0deon]

mastermomo12 said:

Im not gonna be on for a bit of a while, but since im guessing you guys dont like the story, ill leave it at that.

its a fanfiction so your allowed to write whatever you want. so forget about the people that dont like it and just write! lol if you cant tell, i like it. a lot of people have trouble writing fight scenes but you obviosly dont. and i like that its sorta a journal-y point of view. its very different from the other fan fics but its cool

[pathik]

by now it's a really good story. I like the 1st person narrator.

[xxtophfanxx]

when are you going to write more?

[mastermomo12]

I woke up to the sound of hammers. I looked up and saw people rebuilding their homes. I also saw some generals from ba sing sa. Why would they be at some small nowere villiage? I grabbed my glider next to me and walked up to them. "What happened?" Most of them just looked at me, but one said, "We are from Ba Sing Se. I am general Sho, and I am here to try and find out why so many firebenders were here in the nowhere place. The best i could figure out is that they are trying to circle Ba Sing Se, and then attack when we cant get food. Twelve other villages were attacked to day, and we havent reseaved word from them yet." I missed most of what he said cause me and some other kid were betting on wich turtle duck would reach the pond faster. The general grunted and i looked back at him, and boy he did not look happy."Sir!" I stood at attention and ment to bring my glider to my side, but instead it hit me in the head, and i fell over, twitching. The general sighed then said, "Alright! prepare to eradacate the villege!" I ran to the general and said,"What do you think your doing! He replyed, Makeing one less trouble for the earth kingdom.

Enjoy.

[mastermomo12]

I walked sorely, after attacking the general and getting beaten badly. The village was destroyed and everyone went their separate ways. I decided my best hope was to get medical treatment at Ba Sing Se. I noticed that someone was following me, a small little girl. She watched me and followed me every where. I saw a small little cave and decided I would lose this girl once and for all. I ran in and she followed me, as planned. Also, the cave was dark, which would greatly help. I jumped onto a small little hook in the cave roof. S he walked in and looked around. The she looked straight at where i was hidden. I freaked a little, but then she looked away. I climbed out of the cave using foot steps in the roof and i stood on top. The blood rushed to my head and i felt woozy. I felt heat, and saw a huge fireball being hurled at me! " AHHHH!" I screamed. I suddenly saw my attacker. The little girl. "How weak. The spirit of airbending cant stand a little fireball. Pathetic." The spirit of airbending? What was that girl talking about? I wasn't going to wait to find out. I jumped in the air, and shoved my palm out, causing a gust of wind that shoved her into a wall of rock, knocking her out instantly. I jumped back in the air again and shook out my glider and flew away, leaving the girl in the field.

[mastermomo12]

I was flying to...somewhere. After my fight with the girl, I had been trying to find a village that had food and shelter. No luck. Who was that girl? What did she want? What did she mean "spirit of airbending"? I suddenly saw a small village and felt hope. I flew into a small batch of trees a few yards away from the village. I hate to do this, but i gotta leave my staff behind because I think the town is fire nation. The staff could be to suspicious. I walked into town and my fears were correct. Fire nation troops were everywhere. I didn't stand a chance against them all. I had one gold piece and 4 copper pieces. I saved the gold piece for shelter, and used the 4 copper ones for food. I walked into my new home for a day. It was wonderful. Their were paintings that could make you stare for hours. The wall was red with small bursts of purple. I walked into the bedroom and collapsed on the bed. I woke up on the floor with serious bed head. Oh ya, I have hair. I left the Inn and payed for the sleep, then walked into the forest. I approached the tree that had my staff when my head was shoved down. "Darn your hard to track. Its even harder to warn you." I looked up to see who was talking and saw the little girl that fought me not to long ago. Suddenly a thousand fire balls flew in or direction. The little girl deflected alot of them, when out of nowhere, the little girl was suddenly powerful then ever. You could feel the shift of the battle. She burst into flames and disappeared into the forest. I heard a lot of groans and yelps coming from the trees. But as something always has to go wrong, it did. Ten blade tips appeared in front of me. Boy, I was in trouble.