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Post by katara279momo on Jan 27, 2008 19:50:55 GMT 1
After Aang defeted the fire lord 2 years ago that night sokka finally told me toph how much he loved me. Also that night he kissed me, my very first kiss. Now 2 years later we sokka, and me toph are going to get married! i'm so excited but nervous not know whats going to happen on my wedding day. we are going to have the wedding at the earth kingdom. My parents are going to be there to. this is a superize to them because i haven't talked to them sense i wrote that letter to them 2 years ago. But i can tell that they are excited that i'm geting married. I'm 15 but almost 16. Sokka is 18.
sokka: Toph you ready for the big day?
Toph: honestly i'm really nervous.
sokka: yea me too.
Toph: we're is katara and aang shouldn't they be here by now? it doesn't take that long to fly over from the southern airtemple.
Sokka: yea i know i think that they we'll be here any minute know.
Toph: i hope katara's my maid of honor.
sokka: yea and aang is my best man
a few minutes later outside of the wedding house there came aang and katara with appa and momo. Katara and aang are already for the wedding wearing nice clothes for the big day. The guests are already there.the wedding begins. toph walks down the path to sokka. the preist is sokka 's dad. As sokka's dad begins to talk for the wedding something happens. All of sudden like in slow motion an earth quake happens shaking the whole place. pieces of the house being thrown everywhere aang and katara start throwing the peices out of the way from everyone. but they were to late a big rock fell from the celing hitting toph. Toph couldn't see it either but when she did it was to late.
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Post by sokka118 on Jan 27, 2008 20:56:06 GMT 1
Oh man, suspense! Poor Toph! Sounds tragic so far. Are you gonna continue it?
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Post by sokka118 on Jan 27, 2008 20:56:27 GMT 1
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Post by katara279momo on Jan 27, 2008 21:48:24 GMT 1
after the rock hit toph, sokka's face was shocked. sokka ran over to toph crying. then sokka looked at aang. sokka's face was all aang needed to know what he wanted. aang ran over to the huge rock that was over toph and earthbended the rock off of her. but what happened next was a suprise. when the rock was out of the way toph wasn't there. Sokka cryed out load dropping to knees, hands over his face crying. katara was trying to clam sokka down but it wasn't working. Aang said nothing but looked at were the rock landed. he was trying to figure out were she was. then aang saw a hole in the dent were the rock was. something wasn't right
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Post by Dogg450 on Jan 28, 2008 1:57:46 GMT 1
The suspence I can't take it *kills over* Write more!!!*kills over again*
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Post by katara279momo on Jan 28, 2008 2:40:09 GMT 1
After aang see the little hole he goes down to the dent in the floor and earthbends it a liitle bigger. luckly no one say him go down. Sokka crys on and on with out stop. He stats saying stuff to katara like '' i can never keep my lovers ever safe.'' with those last word aang earthbendes the hole even more to go down and look. before he can notice the hole lent down to a chamber. so aang falls down. he gets down there and he can't see anything. so he uses his earthbending to see like toph does. soon he starts walking aroung trying to find toph but no luck yet. 5 mins. into the searching aang starts to walk into some brighter ground. so he finds out that there are torchs around so now he can walk in light. the more he walks around the more he worries about toph. where is she? what could of happened to her? is she ok? is she even alive?
-above ground-
katara stars to notice that aang isn't around. So she starts to freakout.
Katara: sokka where did aang go?
Sokka: i...don't....sniffle..know?
Katara starts walking around and sees the big hole in the ground.
katara: sokka i have a feeling that aang well find toph
sokka: why do you say that?
Katara points her finger at the hole in the ground. with that sokka feels better about toph because he knows aang is a good friend and he well find her. i hope. with a sigh sokka gets up and walks outside for fresh air.
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Jan 29, 2008 3:55:11 GMT 1
nice. continue on.
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Post by katara279momo on Jan 29, 2008 4:15:31 GMT 1
i can't write much right now but i well write more later
-underground-
Aang walks around the torch let tunnels finding no sign of live anywhere. until he sees shadows on the walls it looked like people. so he kept on walking until he heard someone talk. the man said'' yes we have the little blind girl. she can't get away sir she's blind and our cage is wooden just in case'' ''good'' said the other man in a deep voice. ''were di you find the girl any way'' said the man with the deep voice.''she was walking around the tunnels it looked like she was trying to find her way out sir'' said the man. but that's all aang need to hear. the men went away and aang started to look around for toph. then finally he found her. toph was in a corner her head tucked in her knees. aang looked around to see if any one was around. the coast was clear. he walk on over and lightly banged the wooden bars like if knocking. toph turned her head and spoke out is that you sokka?
aang: no it's me aang
Toph: oh aang how did you find me?
aang:well all i can say is it wasn't easy?
Toph: is sokka ok he must be so upset thinking i'm dead
aang: yea he is but he has hope i think he thinks that your still alive
toph: that's a good thing.
in the background aang and toph cold hear people coming closer and closer. aang ran and tryed to hide but it was to late. the men graped aang and put him in the cell with toph.
Aang; who are you?
the men; we are the bagermole warriors or BMW
Aang: why did you lock use up we didn't do anything to hurt you
BMW: your on our land and we don't trust any one from up above
well right more later
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Jan 29, 2008 23:56:47 GMT 1
ohh more suspence
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Post by katara279momo on Jan 30, 2008 20:48:30 GMT 1
this ending has a tokka ending and a kataang ending ENJOY!
After the BMW left aang looked at toph. Asking her if she could see at all. She said no.
toph; aang why don't you just bend us out of here?
Aang: i can't i'm the avatar and i have to make peace with everyone
toph: great because of your avatar we're going to be here forever
Aang: we wouldn't be here forever well make a trade
TOph:what do you mean?
aang: you find out
After the men returned aang stared to talk to them asking if they could make a trade. they agreed. Aang told them if he could thake the ''blind girl'' and he well promise he well come back with someone else. they said yes. they opened the door to the cage. aang pretended that toph need help with walking so he picked her up and walked out. after the men were out of site aang put toph down. TOph's face looked a whole lot better knowing that she could ''see'' now. toph and aang walked down the tunnels but aang could tell toph was walking a little faster. when they got to the opening to were they came from. they went up and were above ground. katara was in a chair sitting waiting for them. then katara noticed that they were there. Katara ran up to them both and hugged them. Sokka heard what was going on and he opned the door from outside walked in and saw his love of his life right in front of him unharmed. Sokka graped toph and toph did the same the hugged each other like they haven't seen each other in years. then toph and sokka kissed.
aang was hugging Katara then looked at her with a little smile on his face. Then he kissed Katara. After they kissed aang asked katara a favor that maybe Katara wouldn't like.
aang: Katara.....um.. toph was captured by these men well... i promised them a trade.
Katara looked aang knowing why he made the trade.
Katara: so your asking me to go with you and be there prisoner with you.
aang: well...yea i'm the avatar and i need to make peace with everyone in the world.
katara: i understand...i well go with you.
katara and aang went into the hole toph and him came from and they headed to the chamber or the cage they were in. The men were there waiting for them. one of the men took them both and put them in the cage. aang soon found out that one of the men's names were Dominic. a few mins. later Dominic and other BMWs cmae in front of the cage. they told aang that they knew they were. And also thanked them for keeping their promise. So they let Aang and katara go. because of what Katara and aang did the BMWs had hope and trust for those above ground. katara and aang went up above ground and started to fix the area for the wedding. by the time they were done it looked even better.
so they started the wedding again. toph walked down the path to sokka and they got married. they went off and went to there new home at the earth kingdom. everyone was throwing rice and they went off. everyone was waving good bye.
Finally with al the courage aang had aang got down on one knee looked at katara and asked her if she would marry him. katara looked shocked then very happy she then said ''yes i will aang'' aang got up and the two shared a kiss. after they kissed Katara said ''i thought you would never ask'' then they shared an other kiss.
-THE END-
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Post by Dogg450 on Jan 30, 2008 23:38:49 GMT 1
Good ending.
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Post by katara279momo on Jan 31, 2008 3:10:56 GMT 1
thanks i'm think of writing an other story here soon
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Post by Dogg450 on Jan 31, 2008 6:01:02 GMT 1
Cool Do you know what you are going to call it?
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Post by katara279momo on Feb 1, 2008 2:23:52 GMT 1
no but it's something really interesting
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Post by Dogg450 on Feb 1, 2008 2:44:11 GMT 1
Oh Okay
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