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Post by flamethrower on Feb 18, 2008 18:07:37 GMT 1
that sounds evil!
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Post by zutarafan4evs on Feb 19, 2008 19:02:41 GMT 1
i liked the story for what its worth but i'm also obviously a zutara fan so im not that keen on the kaatara part - but it was still great! a thumb abd a half !(but only coz of my zutara fanness!otherwise it would be 2)
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Post by justafan on Feb 20, 2008 6:25:12 GMT 1
Ouch , that was harsh. You must really have something of an agenda against katara. I do, i ship her with koh
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Post by Teяa253 on Feb 25, 2008 4:22:18 GMT 1
hmm... Ironically, I ship Zutara, and I still wrote that. actually, I don't really care. Zutara is one of this "it'd be cool but if it doesn't happen oh well" things...
~Toph~
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Post by ZIE on Mar 24, 2008 17:04:32 GMT 1
OH MY GOD... YOU KILLED KENNY!!! I MEAN KATARA!!!! YOU....nevermind yea i liked it it was good. make it more clear who is talking i suggest
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Post by Orophin on Mar 28, 2008 13:35:54 GMT 1
hmm... Ironically, I ship Zutara, and I still wrote that. actually, I don't really care. Zutara is one of this "it'd be cool but if it doesn't happen oh well" things... ~Toph~ We both have our ships, and both don't care too much about them... (Although Tokka will happen, undoubtedly)
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Post by Frausk on Apr 3, 2008 9:09:26 GMT 1
that was a good read, to bad about Zuko turning his back on Katara, but she has her reason and we know why(Crossroads of Destiny and the entire book 1: Water) also i think that Toph can sense that Katara tells the truth when asked about what happened, and if Zuko has gone ''Azula'' then Toph might have some problems! nice Tera253! keep up the good work
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Post by Teяa253 on Apr 3, 2008 18:17:40 GMT 1
well... this is actually the first chapter in a series... However, it's good enough that this one, and maybe the 2nd one, could stand alone and still make sense.
For some reason, it all goes back to Katara... there's something about that character that keeps me coming back again and again...
~Azula~
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Post by Orophin on Apr 3, 2008 20:45:56 GMT 1
The hair?
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Post by Frausk on Apr 4, 2008 21:05:36 GMT 1
hehe
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Post by Orophin on Apr 5, 2008 12:22:12 GMT 1
I mean, have you seen it? She must spend an hour in the morning just doing her hair!
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Post by Teяa253 on Apr 5, 2008 19:33:21 GMT 1
not at 33 she doesn't... ~Zuko~
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Post by Frausk on Apr 5, 2008 19:57:25 GMT 1
who Toph or Katara? if you are talking about Katara, i would say 2-3 hours... or more and Toph... i don't know... since she is blind, bah, she looks great,
*remembers Tales of Ba Sing Se the first story*
hehe, she was kinda scary...
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Post by Teяa253 on Apr 5, 2008 22:49:32 GMT 1
who Toph or Katara? if you are talking about Katara, i would say 2-3 hours... or more and Toph... i don't know... since she is blind, bah, she looks great, *remembers Tales of Ba Sing Se the first story* hehe, she was kinda scary... I was talking about Katara. There's another series I'm writing which takes place 19 years later. In that saga, Katara, 33, has for some reason stopped doing her hair and has let it get to the point where she can no longer do anything about it. it's a disaster. ~Zuko~
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Post by Orophin on Apr 5, 2008 23:08:23 GMT 1
A funny disaster!
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