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Post by zutarafan4evs on Feb 19, 2008 18:04:18 GMT 1
{Steam engulfed the room – benders of two opposite elements joined together - the ultimate forbidden love.}
Katara closed her eyes. It seemed so strange, that heaven was simply a kiss away, and resisting the feeling of warmth beginning to burn up inside her was just making it burn more fiercely than ever. Zuko had never felt such bliss. It felt like he was flying, no sight of a place to land - no need to. This weightless feeling was taking over him.
They broke apart and both blushed. Neither of them knew what to say or how to explain what had happened. Zuko thought he should be the one to cut the silence.
“Erm, well I- -I’d better go check on… things. You- you know” as he was backing towards the door he knocked over a vase of flowers. “Oh!” he leaped to catch it and katara caught the water with her bending, trapping the flowers inside. They made a perfect team, her water bending and caring nature, and his fire bending and strength. “Well I, um … bye.” He stammered, putting the vase back on the table. She bended the water back in and smiled, blushing. As zuko was closing the door -slowly so as to use as much time as possible looking upon her-, she called. “zuko.” She softly said. He looked up immediately. “My question.” She smiled sweetly, and waited for his answer. Truthfully it didn’t take long to find the answer but he needed every possible excuse to be in her company. Inside he smiled. Then outside he smiled. “yes.” He began. As he was leaving he added, “I’d trust you with my life.” and closed the door.
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Post by zutarafan4evs on Feb 19, 2008 18:06:30 GMT 1
plz comment! there will be more 'episode things' to follow if i think the first two went well! (btw, coz im just totaly sad i've already typed up the sequel to this one, just dont wanna post it in case the others aren't a sucess!)
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Feb 19, 2008 23:29:24 GMT 1
i thought it was fine, i don't recall, is this your first fanfic?
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Post by zutarafan4evs on Feb 20, 2008 18:18:39 GMT 1
there was one before it . called love triangle (zutara) and that was sort of the lead up to this one. have a read of it plz and see what you think. plz send me replies and input! :-)
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