Post by justafan on Feb 27, 2008 7:11:32 GMT 1
Zuko’s Loyalty
Zuko looked at azula. He thought to himself. Why did I have to those dam dreams? If it weren’t for those dreams I wouldn’t be here. How long will I last like this? Zuko started to lose sight of his sister; he began to fall asleep. However, as soon as he did, he felt a stab on the right arm, exally the same place as mai’s knife landed earlier. Zuko screamed in pain. Mai and ty lee both awoke from their sleep.
Mai yelled at azula, “What are u doing to him?!”
Ty lee seemed a just as angry, “yea, we fall asleep for a couple of hours, and u mange to do all this to him, without waking us up?”
Azula smiled, “I thought we agreed to not make miserable here for him.”
Mai back to her usual voice, “that doesn’t mean to put so many injuries on his body that not even he can remember how many injuries he has”
Ty lee seemed still angry; “We agreed to not let him out of that tree and to not feed him.”
Azula now annoyed with the constant whinnying just ignored their statements of protest. Azula slowly twisted the knife clockwise. Azula yelled in zuko’s face, demanding to know where the avatar’s camp was. Zuko screamed over azula’s yelling with every twist of the blade. Azula jammed the knife in deeper before twisting it counter clockwise out. Azula started to laugh at this sight. Azula brought a small blue flame to her fingertips. Then traced it over zuko’s open wound. Mai and ty lee turned away from the sight.
Azula knew he wouldn’t tell but she did ask, ty lee and mai would whine about it forever, “so zuzu, are u ready to tell us now.” Zuko looked at Azula and spat blood on her face that has been dripping down from some injury he had felt but wasn’t sure where from. Azula responded by clammily whipping at off her face, then slapping zuko across the face. Zuko looked through his eyes and saw lots of recently opened blood from the slap he just took, afterall she did have claw like fingertips. Zuko looked into the distance and saw a streak of air coming toward them, then zuko looked up and saw appa following the moving air by a couple miles. The air stopped moving as soon as it crossed the river. Zuko could tell it was aang and he was glad it was.
Aang stopped at a holt, “zuko…zuko, are u alright?”
question, comments, i suck as i writer for putting zuko through all of this?
Zuko looked at azula. He thought to himself. Why did I have to those dam dreams? If it weren’t for those dreams I wouldn’t be here. How long will I last like this? Zuko started to lose sight of his sister; he began to fall asleep. However, as soon as he did, he felt a stab on the right arm, exally the same place as mai’s knife landed earlier. Zuko screamed in pain. Mai and ty lee both awoke from their sleep.
Mai yelled at azula, “What are u doing to him?!”
Ty lee seemed a just as angry, “yea, we fall asleep for a couple of hours, and u mange to do all this to him, without waking us up?”
Azula smiled, “I thought we agreed to not make miserable here for him.”
Mai back to her usual voice, “that doesn’t mean to put so many injuries on his body that not even he can remember how many injuries he has”
Ty lee seemed still angry; “We agreed to not let him out of that tree and to not feed him.”
Azula now annoyed with the constant whinnying just ignored their statements of protest. Azula slowly twisted the knife clockwise. Azula yelled in zuko’s face, demanding to know where the avatar’s camp was. Zuko screamed over azula’s yelling with every twist of the blade. Azula jammed the knife in deeper before twisting it counter clockwise out. Azula started to laugh at this sight. Azula brought a small blue flame to her fingertips. Then traced it over zuko’s open wound. Mai and ty lee turned away from the sight.
Azula knew he wouldn’t tell but she did ask, ty lee and mai would whine about it forever, “so zuzu, are u ready to tell us now.” Zuko looked at Azula and spat blood on her face that has been dripping down from some injury he had felt but wasn’t sure where from. Azula responded by clammily whipping at off her face, then slapping zuko across the face. Zuko looked through his eyes and saw lots of recently opened blood from the slap he just took, afterall she did have claw like fingertips. Zuko looked into the distance and saw a streak of air coming toward them, then zuko looked up and saw appa following the moving air by a couple miles. The air stopped moving as soon as it crossed the river. Zuko could tell it was aang and he was glad it was.
Aang stopped at a holt, “zuko…zuko, are u alright?”
question, comments, i suck as i writer for putting zuko through all of this?
