Orophin
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Crikey! Dragon of the South, mate.
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Post by Orophin on Mar 16, 2008 15:12:21 GMT 1
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Bruce8331
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Sokka found Toph!
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Post by Bruce8331 on Mar 17, 2008 4:12:34 GMT 1
I reckon you did a good job, though I noticed from sentence problems, but it was very little that it didn't matter.
All in all, I give you 8/10 (the lacking 2 was because I didn't know who or what was happening, but still great)
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Orophin
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Post by Orophin on Mar 17, 2008 4:19:23 GMT 1
Yeah, if you want to know about the character, read the next one, and look at my post on the last page of the "Make your account her" thread.
Then you'll get a picture of who he is.
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Teяa253
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Post by Teяa253 on Mar 17, 2008 4:52:22 GMT 1
yeah.
of course, people always appreciate characters even more if they can see a picture of him or her.
...except Sanaki. she doesn't care. *winks*
~Iroh~
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Orophin
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Post by Orophin on Mar 17, 2008 4:56:29 GMT 1
Not a literal picture, obviously...
So, what do you think of V'icternus now?
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Post by Teяa253 on Mar 17, 2008 5:05:20 GMT 1
well, I still think he's evil, but he's evil for a reason.
as far as anyone knows, Tera is sadistic for no reason.
~Toph~
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Orophin
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Post by Orophin on Mar 17, 2008 5:14:51 GMT 1
Hold on, which one are you talking about?
RPG/fanfic
or
(Planned) novel series character?
I know one of them is evil, but which one are you talking about?
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Teяa253
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Post by Teяa253 on Mar 17, 2008 5:18:03 GMT 1
there are so many Teras in my realm, but I believe I was talking about the sadistic fanfic Tera.
the Tera from my novel series is... there's no other way to put it... cool.
(she's #2 of 110)
~Katara~
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Orophin
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Post by Orophin on Mar 17, 2008 5:24:24 GMT 1
Ooh, cool!
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Post by Teяa253 on Mar 17, 2008 7:33:38 GMT 1
here's the full names of the first 5 characters
(there's no order, and I don't know how I numbered them. nonethless, here ya go)
1. Hyrem Ajun Westfarthing
2. Tera Kyla Zakatau
3. Emryk Taku Savage
4. Liberty Teru Mezkiel IIII
5. Brenna Zair Westfarthing
facts:
Hyrem and Tera are married
Emryk and Liberty are married
Brenna is Hyrem's mother
of course, if I extended that list to fit all 110 characters, there'd be so many bonds and relationships it wouldn't be funny.
Oh, and in case you were wondering about why they have different last names if they're married, there's a huge explanation for it that I have at my fingertips.
~Ty Lee~
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Orophin
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Post by Orophin on Mar 17, 2008 8:27:02 GMT 1
Well, if you want to...
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Post by Teяa253 on Mar 17, 2008 8:28:08 GMT 1
well, it's a huge wall of text. I think since it's irrelevant to the subject at hand, I'll just keep it.
~Katara~
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Orophin
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Post by Orophin on Mar 17, 2008 8:33:36 GMT 1
Well, that sounds good, don't want to go too far off topic.
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Post by Teяa253 on Mar 17, 2008 8:35:31 GMT 1
yep.
~Ty Lee~
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Orophin
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Post by Orophin on Mar 17, 2008 10:17:32 GMT 1
So, now that you have some backstory on him (V'icternus), what do you think of him?
You might be able to see why he doesn't like Benders all that much...
He was 15, living a pretty good life, before...
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