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Post by Ilovethisshow on Mar 23, 2008 19:16:43 GMT 1
Ozana: yeah, i bet you can't.
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Post by Orophin on Mar 23, 2008 19:17:45 GMT 1
I seem to love fanfic series too much for my own good...
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Mar 23, 2008 20:30:03 GMT 1
Ozana: *laughs* i thought you were with Sanaki.
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Post by らuやにr on Mar 23, 2008 21:05:23 GMT 1
Ok! Terohs next chapter is in 3 parts because it is more understandeble then...
Chapter 6 - Terohs Teenage -
New Friends And Enemys Part One
It has gone 6 years sence Pi Cho took Wei Yan. Six long years whit traning as a Dai Li.
For six years ive feelt a horrible feeling it...It was burning. It was not direct pain but more like rage and strong anger. I missed my old family my new brother that was taken whitout reason.
Now i had have enouh! I dressed myself in the Dai Li uniform of mine and climed down the window.
It was time...I jumped and walked on houses until i got too the wall of Ba Sing Sa.
The only thing i carrid was my sword and a bag whit food.
I did a movement and a huge part of the wall opend.
I took the way into the desert. It was quite many sand storms but nothing could hold back The Son Of The Earth!
Inn about the middle of the gigant dessert I found a strangat was egg. I didnt think about what was in it i just hurryid and put it in my bag.
Some days later i was outside The City of Omashu. I neede too rest for while soo i whent inn.
The gards didnt seem to cear. And this looked like the place too stay for a while i found a spot that was perfect on a roof. Then a paiper come flying whit the wind.
It was a WANTED-poster: This person is wanted dead or alive big prise. That reminds me of tthat i got no money. I this my chance? I tought for a second...Yes it is...
Inn the night i was ready too start my first bountyhunt.
It was almost too easy he didnt expect a atack while he was mugging a defenceless woman
It was dark i was on the wall behind the wanted person and waited for the right moment.
When she was about too give him her money i looced his feet and hands too the grownd.
"I see you like mugging defenceless young ladys huh?.." I said and came out of the dark and maked the woman run.
" Please dont turn me inn Sir i will never do it again!" He cryied like a child.
"Im not gonna make the gards take you......I am going too give you too the Firesoldiers myself and get all the money!"I yelled and loocked his hands togetter
"No! NOOO! Please!" He criyed but i didnt lissend to him....
"Some months later I have Cought 249 thief's and benders. Then I found a new wanted-poster but this one was difrent.....: Wanted dead or alive. Nickname: The Swindler. Firebender. Dangerus Big prize for her head. Red clohts a headband and she goes bearefot.
"Interesting..."I said and smiled cliver.
Thanks for reading the first part. And i bet some of you know who it is...
Comments please. And Part two will air soon... He he ;D.
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Mar 23, 2008 21:39:54 GMT 1
Ozana: Yes i do think i know who your talking about. hehe, this should be good.
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Post by らuやにr on Mar 23, 2008 22:07:40 GMT 1
Teroh: Iven i cant wait....
Oh. For the last time Teroh, she isnt able for you. Demn. He is daydreaming...
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Mar 23, 2008 23:05:12 GMT 1
Ozana: is he daydreaming about me? ugh.
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Post by らuやにr on Mar 23, 2008 23:09:02 GMT 1
I dont know exacely his totally gone.
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Mar 23, 2008 23:32:19 GMT 1
Ozana: Awkward, oh and i just put another part up, go check it out. I think you might know what the rumor's about.
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Post by らuやにr on Mar 24, 2008 1:52:34 GMT 1
Teroh: Something is about too happend. You dont know what....
This is no real problem... I think.
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Mar 24, 2008 2:04:01 GMT 1
Ozana: do i need to know? BTW i edited it a little, you may need to read it again. hehe.
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Post by Orophin on Mar 24, 2008 3:06:00 GMT 1
Sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I love it so far!
I can picture someone with Dai Li training becoming a very good bounty-hunter.
But, is Teroh good enough to face off against Sanaki Li Chan?
Only time will tell...
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Mar 24, 2008 3:06:53 GMT 1
Ozana: indeed.
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Post by らuやにr on Mar 24, 2008 3:08:33 GMT 1
Teroh: You have no idea....
Another suprises are yet too come. He he....
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Post by Orophin on Mar 24, 2008 3:11:48 GMT 1
I love surprises!
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