Post by らuやにr on Mar 20, 2008 17:14:16 GMT 1
Important: The pull whent wrong so just so you know "Ok" is everything good and please explain when you answer it.
Alright
I saw many fantastic storys about Sanaki, Ozana....
So ive dicided too write about my own. Im sorry it will be slow in the
start but i hope it will be ok
A little backgownd (and this time not in quick edit ;D):
It all starts 10 years after Aang brutal death against firelord Ozai.
And our hero, was still 10 years old.
Capiter 1
-----My Childhood------
It was a normal day nothing unusual could happend. I was outside the House and playd whit a ball.
"Teroh!?" my mom yelled"Yes?"i yelled back"come in and eat dinner".
"ok!"i answerd pecefully.
When i got in and tok a seat i tok a look at the table"Oh no! not cabbage and Radish again!"I said i just wanted to puke.
"sorry hunny but you know how poor whit money we have"mom said
"OK then!" i said "your dad will be home soon" she continiued.
Or not....
5 hours later mom strarted crying "he must have been caught by fire nation soldiers" she criyed and i tryed to not lose the hope.
Then ten minutes after he rushed in "dad!" i yelled "quick we must flee before---" then 2 fire nation soldiers blowed up the door.
And a well dressed fire nation man came inn. "Hold the man down"
he yelled and sendt a scary look at me and started to laght
"Did you think i would let you go after you stole gold from me?" he said too my father.
He just looked away. "how can you do this Pi Cho!" he yelled after looked at him again"for a pice of gold you will punich me!" He yelled again
"Me your own--" The evil comander cut him " the past is nothing to me Shurin, you are not a..." (he said something i couldnt hear to my father)
And dad turnd his head and looked trefied at me
" Oh dont be afraid of the little one" The comander said
"he he i think i could get some moneys for him inn Ba Sin Sa"he said.
"No! You cant do that!" mom yelled too him.
" I can and i will but i got too finish of some death meat over here". he said seriusly and quiet.
"No! not in the front of the child!" my dad was begging.
"Oh yes! I will!" he yelled angry back.
And he tok his sword and...(you all know what happens then)
Then he tok a pice of my cloths and cleand the blade.
"Take the witch away and sell the boy!"
The other pice of The Childhood will come soon
Now What too you think people? Shall i give up or continiue
?comments would be nice ;D
