The Rise Of Teroh (The story)

[Orophin]

Still a good series, can't wait to see how everything turns out!

I want to know how Teroh got from where he was to where he is!

[1bboss]

who was teroh's original dad.....and is toph and everyone else still alive in this story?

[Teяa253]

I want to know that too.

EDIT: poll now, huh? dude, you're way too hard on yourself. the best vote was 'OK'? you should have also put 'I liked it' and 'I loved it' because I know I at least liked it. it's better than OK.
~Mai~

[らuやにr]

Maybe you right but i was too fast whit the buttons soo....


Teroh: Iven i toldd him that he was a good writer...


At least your friendly today. He he.

[Teяa253]

well hey, have you read mine (Avatar: Mysteries)?
I haven't seen any of your posts there.
...maybe I'm just an idiot.
~Zuko~

[らuやにr]

Well ive read it and i must say i liked what i saw. And no youre not an idiot.


Teroh: Yeah it was.... wait im supost too be bad not good. But ive got too say that you a bit hard too yourself.

[Ilovethisshow]

Ozana: Yo...

[Teяa253]

Sanaki: so why don't you all post there if you like it...
~Sanaki~

[らuやにr]

Ok so i was sleepy i was too tierd. But your story was great.

Teroh: But Sanaki? Arent you blind??

[Ilovethisshow]

Ozana: yep, completly and totaly. hehe, i'm still laughing at Aang, this will last for ever.

[らuやにr]

The last chapter of my chilhood will come soon. And may suprise people....

[Ilovethisshow]

Ozana: maybe even me!

[Teяa253]

Mar 22, 2008 19:11:03 GMT 1 らuやにr said:

Ok so i was sleepy i was too tierd. But your story was great.

Teroh: But Sanaki? Arent you blind??

Sanaki: yes I'm blind. I don't see what goes on here. I have to have someone else be here to read it to me, and then I tell them what I want to say. sometimes it's Tera253, other times it's Kai, and once it was even Tera. (Tera253 is a guy. Tera is the girl in Tera253's sig)
so yeah, that's how it works.
~Sanaki~

[らuやにr]

Ok Guys this is the last part of Terohs childhood.


Enjoy!


-- Chapter 5 --
A Dai Lies Nerve



"Dad?..." I asked my new father when i woke up. "Yes Son?"

"Can I walk too school today?"I asket whit big cute eyes. "Eh.. its dangeros and i... Ok but just today." He answerd not so happy.

"Kasumi can follow me if you want Dad." I said just too make this work out.

When we( I and Kasumi)Was walking in the town and we almost have got too the shcool I saw a
strange young woman whit a cup in her hand and a sight on the chest: Please give the blind girl some money.

I looked at her a few minutes. Her eyes where totally white and she was about something betwin 18-24. I stod right in front of her and did some grimases whit my face, she dint iven
move her head she was totally blind thats for sure.

"Are just gonna stand there and make fun of me kid!? Or give some money!

"Eh sorry my Mom sais im not alaowed too walk whit money on the street.

"Hmpf! Then get out of the way....Twinkle towes! Ohh. That was long time ago ive used that name..."

I dint get it havent i known better i would have swear she look like the blind girl on a old wanted poster. The one that traveld whit avatar Aang many years ago from the storys. But she woldnt be in Ba Sing Sa. But They never actually cought her soo.

When we arived too the Earthbending School the class have already started.

It lookt out too be a nice day as always. Or at least i tought....


"Hello everyone!" I said Happy as the day. But Everyone lookt down.

"Whats wrong?" I said in huge wondering.

"A Kid that was on hollyday just came back." A terefied student named Guo Wang said.

"Why is that so bad?" I still was cearius.

"He his gang are the worst schoolbullys ever. *Cryes* And if we tell the teacher whats happening we will get crusht. And the worst thing is he wear the favorite student before you. So watch out."He warned me.

"Does he have a name?"I asked too be heroic and tough.

"Yes his name is Dong Zhoa." He answerd and continiued crying.

"And why are you crying?" I asked too show that i cear.

"He is going too beet me and all the others in the class! And then the new favorite..." He said. And i could feel that he was not lying.

Some hours later and it was some minutes too lunch break.

"The Boulder Nead some food so he is going too leave for a moment and Teroh is in charge."

He whent out of the yard and then the chaos started.

Dong and his big strong gang started too act like they where kings.

He beeted them up if they dont gave him theyr money.Then he atacked Guo Wang.

He got no money too give soo they beeted him up whit powerful earthbending.

Then there was enough! " Hey take one on your own level! Let him go!

Then they turned around. "Hey look Dong! He got your hat!

Then the biggest and uglyest tournd around. "Ah look what we have here boys! A little hero! Ha-Ha-Ha!" He said in laught.

His gang laught whit him.

"Now werry funny little boy now give me my hat!" He yelled high.

"No! Im not gonna do that!" I yelled back.

Everybody steard at me. It was obyously no one before me that have dear do this.

"What! What make you think you can beat us in a fight?!" He yelled the highest he could.

"THIS!" I yelled and created a big rock and sendt it against him. It knocked him flying and he crasht into the the yardwall.

The others was just running.

I whent over too Guo Wang. "Are you alright?" I asked him.

" Yes. Thank too you i am. Your a hero! And you beated Dong easey! He said and saw his Dad.

"Boy. I saw eveything. Thank you! You defended my son you got a Dai Lies nerve. I am a instructor in the Dai Lie Academy. I want you too start there its a good job and you will become important. Your parents want that right?"He said too me werry happy.

"Yes i gess so. And i really want to become a Dai Lie!" I Said and told him who my father was so they could talk.

After a hour it was time for my Dad to pick me up.

"Well i know you wanted to walk today so no wagon and ive talked to Mr.Wang. Thats great and for the spesial day ive buyed you a gift from the new firenation Metal Shop in the town." He said and smiled.

Then he gave me a sword. It was quite beutiful.

"Take a look at the blade. It was soo uniqe that the Blacksmiht coulndt tell what kind of metal it was." He said. I looked at the blade it was totally black. Hmm. I wonderd. Is this the legendery sword that was made from a comet. No way.

"Thanks Dad!" I said and huged him.

"It was captured from a worrior then he was arested whit his hole family. Or at least a pergnent
woman ive heard.


When we where on our way home I saw the strange woman again. This time my Dad was whit me soo.

"Hey Dad can I give her some money?" I asked him.

"Sure you can Teroh." He said and gave me some coins.

When I ran to her and puted the coins inn the cup of hers she smiled and said: "Thank you kid nice of you too come back."

Then she was taken too a wooden wagon of many firenation soldiers. And they loocked it whit a big wood pice.

"Why are you doing that is it inlegal too be blind now!" I shuoted too them.

"She is a dangerus earthbender called The Runaway, The Blind Bandit or just Toph Bai Fong." The soldier said.

"I dont cear I liked her! She havent hurt anyone! And why the wood!?. I said mad.

"Come Teroh, its nothing too do."


Then we got home sad news was to get.

Mom was crying and it was burned almost everywere.

"They came and took Wei Yan! A Commander from the firenation came whit a small gruop firesoldiers and took him." She cryied.

I Knowd good who This COMMANDER was. But why did he want too make a hell for me?

Only one thing was for sure enough is enough. I was going too continiue train as a Dai Lie and fight evil like he was a perfect eksample on I wanted....REVENGE.




Thanks for reading!

- Chapter 6 - Six years after the training will air soon .....
New Firends And Enemys


Comments Please ;D !

[Teяa253]

Toph. awesome.
She better get out. you can't imprison the Chuck Norris of the Avatar series for more than 28.3751964 seconds.
~Katara~