The Rise Of Teroh (The story)

[らuやにr]

Ok You might be suprised or not actuelly we will just wait and see ;D



- Capter III -
New Days


Ok! this was crepie."You are free too chouse who you want too adopt Sir" The ugly high man said. What adopt!? No! I couldnt be adopt! No! i... what a day.

"Ill take that one." and pointed at me. Oh boy! how is this gnna end?

"Then you can get him yourself" the ugly Man Said.

But then i figiured out that this was the only way and chance too get out and walked out myself.

"Now do you got a name?" the nice man asked.

"T-Teroh" i answerd.

"No last name? Good." he continiued.

"But please can you adopt another one?"

"why should i..Eh.. alright then. Get your friend and come on! He tryed to answer nice.

"Thanks Teroh, looks like we are brothers now." Yan Wai, Said happy.

When we walked out they saw a big horse-lizard wagon. whit golden parts and shiny weals. It was magnificent.

When we had traveld ito the city for a while we saw a hudge house suronded by a big garden whit beautiful flowers.

When i stept out off the wagon i could smell a delichus smell from flowers fresh air and.... Food!

A nice young lady came from the house.
"you two must be the new minior masters" she said

"We dont know"I said "we are just adopted" Wei Yan continiued.

"But then you are the new masters" she said in pure happynes. And then she huged us.

"Eh you can let go now" I said before she was scueezeing us too death.

"Oh! Sorry masters im your new servant. Or one of them, but you must be hungry come on inn."She insisted.

"Ive staren too like this Teroh." Wei Yan said.

It was the biggest house ive ever seen it was hundres of painting on the walls. Many rooms but it was almost too big i missed the old small house Mom and Dad. I started to cry. The servant named Kasumi, that met them outside ran over too me and hold arownd me "Its ok. Its ok."

"I want my Mom and Dad back." I cryied.
"I too" she answerd "I wasent bornd a servant." she told me.

When i came to myself again we should eat. It was Hundred of difrent kinds of food.
Maye this wasnt so bad afteral. Then a big door opend in the other side of the table.

A lady at my Moms age came out. "Were is my new childrens?" she asked and looked at us

"Awww. Arent you two cute im your new MOM. But my... how dirty you are go take a bath." She said nicely.

"Ok!" I tryed to sound calmed.

"But where is the Wooden box to bath in?" I was aways Bathing in a box at home.

"What did you say?" She laght " A Child whit humor. Thats good." She said in half laght.

But then she looked at me " Oh dear child! You are serius." She said.

"Kasumi! show them the bath." She said high. "Yes mistress." She answerd.

This was a new experiens for me everything was so difrent.

Then we came too a big room . It was warm and comfteble. It was three round holes in the end of the room. "clohtes of and into the water." She said.

"Eh could you turnd around or something please" I asked her

"Of curse master" She answerd.

"And plaese call me Teroh." I said.

"Of curse master Teroh." She said.

"Eh.. nevermind." I ended trying.

I and Wei Yan, jumped into a hole.

"Ahh. this is also a good part of this i gess." I said to myself. But wha! Kasumi started too wash me. It was kinda good until she tryed to get betwin my legs.

"wait! I can take it from here." I comvinst her to stop and then we was ready. Or so i thougt.

"I live your new clothes on the floor boys!" She said nicely as always. She smiles and walk out.

"Ok lets check these cloths now." I said. It fits perfect maybe i could get used too this afteral.

After weve eaten. Or just almost because theres new Mom was asking about everything and she told us that our new second names was Beng Tai.

Then it was to go too bed."But were is the sleeping floor?" I asked. "You sleept on the floor before Son?" The man that was supose too be my new Father said.

" Well yes we was out of money all the time." I answerd.

"Poor you. Come on I will show you the bed." He said nice.

" Come Ill show you your bed" Kasumi said to Wei Yan.

"To morrow we will talk about a earthbending school boys." He said before he walked out.

But I could still not forget that firenation soldier that look nice or the comander!

But i look forward too the next day.




Sorry if i promisend more action. But he cant earthbend yet so he cannot do any
fighting stuff yet but i hoped you guys like it.

-- Chapter 4 --
Son Of The earth will air soon



And i would be glad if i get comment. As always;D

[Teяa253]

I like that a lot. the "poor kid becoming a rich kid" is incredibly awesome.
good job...
~Katara~

[らuやにr]

Its getting better and better. Next time he will.... no im not gonna tell yet.

[Teяa253]

okie. I'm a patient guy. I can wait.
~Toph~

[Orophin]

The Son of the Earth, huh?

Sounds like a very cool name for the next one *Thumbs up*.

[らuやにr]

Thanks! And Cool pic Tera253 ;D

[Orophin]

You like it too?

Cool.

[Teяa253]

hey, thanks.
~Ty Lee~

[らuやにr]

Ok! I think you will like this one ;D. One Of the old minder but more familar characther is in it . The part is long as hell but ok


-- Chapter 4--
Son Of The Earth



What a night. It was like sleeping in heaven. Heh heh. Yan Wei is still sleeping.

"Werry well. Time too wake up!" I yelled as high as i could but he just turnd around and continiued his sleeping.

"I can at least see someone is awake." I head from behind me. It was just Kasumi.

"I broght you and your brother some food." She said and smiled bright.

" Thanks. But but its not my birthday or something like that?" I said whitout knowing that every mornings will be like this.

" Teh heh. Its not but breakfuast on the bed is daily here.Master Teroh." She said. Ahh. She still dont get it! "Its only Teroh, from now on. Ok?" I tryed to make her understand.

"Sure Mas... I mean Teroh."

Later after I, and Wei Yan have eaten we went down the stairs to see The lad..I mean Mom and Dad.

"Now how was the first night boys?" Our new Mom asked.

"It was great! This can become nice afterall!" I answerd her. Wei Yan noded.

"Good too hear!" Dad said whit a werry happy voice.

"Now maybe you want to start at the earthbending school then." Mom said gentely.

"What! No Sons of mine shall learn from a COMMON teacher in the city. No ive just readed about a new opend spesial Training Center." Dad yelled.

"Well my little Wei Yan, will!" Mom yelled angry back.

" Well ok. Wei Yan, Shall start on a common school but not Teroh! He shall get a inportant jod when he have finisht shcool!" He yelled too her.

This will be a hard day.

When we whent out of the house and to difrent wagons i thuogt: This is going to be hard every morning.

When we got too a little school inn the other side of the city i jumped out of the wagon and asked Dad: "Is this my new school?" I was a little afraid of the master inn here just by looking at the big door whit pictures of earthbenders on.

"Yes." Dad said soft too me and smiled happy.

When we got into the hall a strange old laidy sat behind a desk and read a earthstory-book

"Here is the new student." Dad said. "Whats you name kid?" She asked whit a deep and scary tone. i hided myself behind Dad. Anything was better then her.

"Hes name is Teroh Beng Tai." Dad answerd for me. Then she started to laughter. "Is your afraid of me, just wait until you meet the teacther!

"Dont scear him. he or her will surely not be that bad." He tryed to comfort me.

"Oh just wait and see. Ill show you the way inn too your classroom." She said and Pushed me away.

"Make me proud Son, Daddy will get you after school!" Dad said before he disaperd out of the door.

"wait here." She said and stoped me infront of the door to the room. Some minutes later she came out smiling and puhed me inn. "Good luck! You will need it." she said and dissaperd.


It was a quite big room full of earth no floor and some few stairs inn the end on the top the techer sat. it was too dark up there to even see what gender it was. Just a quite big shadow.


Then a male voice said: " Soo you, are Teroh Beng Tai huh? He asked me. "Y-yes." I answerd him cearfully.

"So you, think you, are ready too learn advaced earthbending?" He asked. "I dont know am I?" I Asked quick. I was werry nervous and couldnt think clear.

"Negatory! The Bolder, do not think you, are ready yet!" He yelled but... "What bolder?" I asked.

"Terohs new teacher is The Bolder!" He answerd. "Huh?" I asked. But if hes name was The Bolder... Oh that make more sence. But where have i heard that name before?

"Oh! Now i remember where ive heard that name before!!" I said.

And The Bolder came out of the shadows and smiled.

He had been growing a long beard and had no shoes.

"You are the one that lost against The Blind Bandit. My Old Dad told me that he watched the fight. Awsome!"

"Ohh no. Not you too." He said a bit down.

"Its ok. I still think you are the best." I tryed to make him feel better.

"The Bolder thanks for the compliment but its not going too change anything ive traind myself in many years so im better now. And you, are here to learn too disiplin the Earth. Not to chear storys."

"Ok the first thing is strenght. How big rock can you hold?!" He asked in half anger. "Eh?.. A small one." I said Inn hoping I would get to hold a small one.

"Ha-ha-ha! If you want to be a good earthbender you must learn too dont care how big or heavy the rock is!" He yelled whit all his air.

"Ok Sir." I said. Crap! It didnt work. "Well now..."He said and bended a rock of a size of a waggon over me and comanded: "Do ready too hold it on your back!" He said and slowly sat it on my back.

Oh mohter earth how heavy it was! Then i rememberd what he sait and foght back against the whight.

I stand there for at least ann hour and then The Bolder said: "Good lets seee is you can move too." And maked a small path inn the earth that was long and round. "I diside if its enouh. Now start running!" He yelled as if it was about life.

3 hours later i could bearly move my feet. "Good! Now rest before the next part of the lesson begins.

I felt a bit good after that and i feelt a bit stronger than before. I wonder what the next lesson is.

"Ok! Good job untill now but now we have too go outside too continiue." He opend the wall whit bending and whendt out inn the school yard. It where many kids there everyone had uniforms and everyone where rich or so they said.

"Ok. Teroh here is your school uniform." He said and gave me one whit a hat. I took a look at the other ones. But they didnt have a hat. Why? I looked at The Bolder, and he smiled briht as the sun shined. "Ok everybody this is Teroh!" He said. "Hello Teroh!" everybody answer togeter.

"Go stand aside someone." He said.

"Wow!" One of the others said. " what?" I asked him. "The one whit the hat is the new favorite student! You must have impresst the techer. How long could you hold the rock? And count whit the running."

"Eh... four houers." I answerd him. Everyone:"Gasp!!!" It must have been a lot. "I could only hold onehalf hour. And just some of the others could hold for two. You must be a superboy or something!" One of the others said.


"Ok stop talking! The Bolder, will now show you How you bend rocks yourselfs. But first..." He comanded.


Then he created a small mountain in front of us. "Now one of you smash this mountain into pices!"

One of the studens walked too the mountain. Then he did ready his hand too hit and...

Nothing. It didt iven fall a little part of it. Everyone tryed in many difrent ways. Exsept from me.

"Come on! The Bolder, do not like what he see!" He yelled. Then I standed up and walkt too the mountain.

Then I jumped in front of it and Smasht the gownd under my feets when i landed and got into the stands of take something whit my back

Everyone shout: "Move! it falling a big rock". Everyone else than The Bolder. He smiled and said: The Bolder is happy too see someone learnd of the lessons. Ha-ha!"

And i took the rock from from the sky whitout problems "You just have too be as a part of the earth." I said proud of myself. I started running and inn a unbelivebole high speed inn a little path. Then i let go on the mountain and crusht it whit no problem.


And then it was quiet. "The Bolder think this was the most...." Oh no. tought. "PERFECT HE HAS EVER SEEN!!" He said. Puh! this was sceary.

"Now do as The Bolder do everyone." And then he did a move whit his left hand. It looks like he was hiting up and a rock came up from the grownd.

Then everybody made it even I. "Now.... Hit the rock as if it was the an enemys head!" He yelled too everyone. And I hited the rock as hard as i could.

It crusht the yardwall like a pice of paipre. "The Bolder...Eh was planing that of curse.

He was lying I dont know how but I feelt it. "You are lying you wasent planing it!" Ops. What did i say. "But how did you know The Bolder, lyied?"He said. " Uh.. I.." But then."Ha-ha! You must be the best student The Bolder, ever have had!" And continiued whit the others.

After a while he wanted to tech how too push away a even bigger rock also called a bloder.

"No. Thank you I already know. He he! And then I sendt a huge bolder aignst a three and broke it."

"Good you are really a quick learner! No. Wait you are a Son Of The Earth!"


A couple of hours later Dad came for bring me home.

"Now how was the first day?"He asked me."It was great! Just wait untill we get home and ill show you everything ive learnd..... Dad!" I said and huged him.

" Good my Son you, make me proud. And i must thank and pay the techer.." I looked at him."..But that will be later lets get home and tell your Mom the fantasic news."

And later after ive showd everyone I was just tierd and whent too bed and look forward too next day too.



I hope you liked this one i worked long whit it.;D

Im happy if i could get a comments


And: -- Capter 5 --
A Dai Lis Nerve will come tomorrow. Sorry exited readers

[Teяa253]

hm.
well I liked it. it's got an interesting touch. this is much better than I thought it would be.
I still say you whould run it through an MS Word spellcheck to make it easier to read.
but that's just me.

UPDATE: I'm putting your story on the fanfic main menu.
~Iroh~

[らuやにr]

Thanks! Tera253.

But i still think that Teroh as a kid was mutch nicer.


Teroh: Yeah. thanks (sarcastic).


Hey be nice Teroh.

Teroh: Sorry.

[flamethrower]

nice one. it was kind of long, but at least it had The Boulder. has Teroh actually been trained with earthbending before?

[らuやにr]

No that why his called the son of the earth ;D


And the pull whent too hell soo. Please dont ask


Teroh: yeah this moron fixt it wrong and sais he is tierd of the day.

Ahh. Come on Teroh your not so good youself and im the one writing the story.

[Ilovethisshow]

Aang: cool story.

Ozana: yep.

[らuやにr]

Teroh: Im normaly against firebenders but your the Avatar Ozana, so its ok and i like you..in a way.


Oh no. Here we go again.Can you stop that Teroh i dont think shes interested in you. And thanks;D