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Post by justinrob on Apr 6, 2008 21:16:26 GMT 1
It was in the middle of the day,and Lei went out happily.He somehow got good dreams when he gets bad dreams.He went to the stalls.He was going to the fruit stall until a girl that looked to be 14 with a scar on her neck dropped a basket of fruit.Lei said,'let me help you with that.'She said'No i don't need help.'Lei mumbled to himself,'looks like you do.'She said,'What?'Lei said,'Nothing.'The girl gave him a suspicous look.Lei asked,'Whats your name?'She said,'Sanaki.'Lei said,'nice to meet you.'He stook out a hand.Sanaki kept on picking up fruit.Sanaki asked,'whats your name?'He said,'Lei.'She had a fruit in front of her,but she didn't pick it up.She was putting her hand around the floor.Lei said,'It's in front of you.'Sanaki said,'Don't think about giggling,I'm blind ok?'Lei said,'Ok.'Sanaki said,'Look Lei i appreciate you for helping but i'm not dumb.'Lei said,'You don't look dumb.I MEAN BLIND.'Sanaki threw a fireball at him.He tryed to draw his swords,but he was to late he was injured on the chest.A village healer was next to him luckily.He was healed but he's weak.He tryed to find Sanaki to apoligize.Finally he gave up and went home.Surprised Lei was.Sanaki was in front of his cabin.By her look waiting.She stood up.Sanaki said,'Sorry for throwing a fireball at you.'Lei said,'Damage has been done,andi should be apoligizing.Sanaki said,'For what?'Lei said,'I'm not used to socilizing.Look tomorow i'll tell you now i need my rest ok?'Sanaki said,'Fine.'
He was surprised she came.Then he went to a endless sleep.
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Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Apr 6, 2008 23:07:03 GMT 1
alright. bringing in RPG's. nicley written
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Teяa253
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Post by Teяa253 on Apr 6, 2008 23:11:13 GMT 1
nicely written. I just suggest spacing it farther apart. I'll PM to you waht I mean... ~Iroh~
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Orophin
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Post by Orophin on Apr 7, 2008 1:00:28 GMT 1
Yeah, I agree...
But, good story, and you get a bonus for including the mghty Sanaki Li Chan!
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Post by Teяa253 on Apr 13, 2008 10:54:09 GMT 1
seconded. ~Sanaki~
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