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Post by justinrob on Apr 6, 2008 23:12:23 GMT 1
It was in the middle of the night,and Sanaki rememvbered where Lei's cabin was.Sanaki knocked on the door.Lei quickly grabbed her arm and got her in.Sanaki said,'Hey what's th-'Lei said,'Shhhhhhhhh.'Sanaki whispered,'What's the big idea?'Lei whispered,'I think I'm being stalked.'She said,'What?!'Lei said,'Look over there.'Lei pointed to a rhino.Sanaki was confused.She said,'What's going on?!'He said,'Well my past preety much involves it.'
30 minutes later........
Sanaki said,'Wow.'He nodded.Finally he looked out and saw the rhinos gone.'Well now you know,'He said.'Well your unlucky,'She said.He started tearing up a bit.'Don't cry come on,'she said.'Mabye you just go back home i need to be alone,'He said.'Ummm ok.'She said.As he saw Sanaki leave and close the door,he heard a scream.He quickly got his swords.He got outcold by a archer that hit him with a giant rock...
Find out what happens in chapter 4!!!
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Teяa253
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Post by Teяa253 on Apr 6, 2008 23:16:25 GMT 1
well-played. just a pointer: Sanaki's not completely blind. she uses firebending to "see" kinda like how Toph uses earthbending.
good work. ~Toph~
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Apr 6, 2008 23:33:47 GMT 1
sweet. what's gonna happen
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Post by Orophin on Apr 7, 2008 1:05:09 GMT 1
Yeah, I have to know!
To the next chapter, and beyond!
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Post by Teяa253 on Apr 13, 2008 10:55:25 GMT 1
go Sanaki... ~Azula~
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