◊Christina◊
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Post by ◊Christina◊ on Jun 29, 2008 20:30:10 GMT 1
Okay, this is my first potential fanfic. with a plot. Some parts might be cheesy, but this is pretty much my first fanfiction that I am planning to have an actual plot and be not completely cheesy and happy and blah and boring. I am not good at making titles at all, and if you don't understand the perspective or plot, say so, and I'll PM you or edit it a little to make it more clear. Here goes nothing...
One more thing, it is going to be changing perspective.
The Loss of All, the Gain of One
"Why did he leave?", Sokka broke the silence. We had all been just sitting around the fire, trying to stay hidden, even after all these years. I don't have to tell him, I worked that hard not to think about it. I won't tell him. "I don't really... I forgot", I replied. He had a brief look of suspicion, but it then vanished. "Sorry", he replied. I heard Toph say something to Sokka, obviously trying not to be heard. "Not that I care, but don't talk about..." is all I heard. There was a strange sound from behind. "Get out of here!", Sokka whispered violently, "I'll see who's there." "Sokka, even after all these years, you still don't trust us to be able to at least help you if whoever it is is dangerous? We aren't going anywhere", I replied rudely. We had gone through this many times before. "Fine, Katara, just, fine", he replied angrily. Why does he get this frusterated even now? Its been 8 years, and someone or something finds us almost every day.
I recognized the strangers' voices. There was something about them... but who could they be? I had run into probably hundreds of travelers over the years, but there was something about these two that reminded me of someone, even before I came out of the brush to face them. "Katara? Sokka?" I asked without a thought. "How do you know our names?" replied the male voice. It had to be them. I stepped into the firelight. They backed away immediately, I could tell they recognized me. Sokka whispered something to the other two, and they backed away. "Oh no", I said.
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Post by ◊Christina◊ on Jun 29, 2008 21:16:57 GMT 1
The Unexpected Reunion "Aang, you aren't welcome here", Sokka warned. "Haven't you caused the world, and us, enough pain? You think we would trust you? After you left? Why?” Sokka said angrily. "Just, go!" I saw he was near tears. "Sokka", I started, but I stopped. Aang suddenly looked at me. It cut through me like a knife in the silence. It was partly my fault... but I had to learn to forget. I stirred a bit uncomfortably, and Sokka backed me and Toph away.
I can't believe it. I brought this upon myself, and the burden upon them. "Can I just talk to you?” I asked. "Just, get out of here. Go!” Sokka was starting to break down. His threats did not affect me. "What can be done about it? The past is done", I said. "Yes, it is done. And you will be done if you don't leave NOW", Sokka warned even further. "Sokka, I am much more powerful than you.
I saw the tension between them. Sokka began to fret in acknowledgement that his threats and warnings meant nothing. "What do you want", Sokka asked. "I want my friends-", Aang started. "You are no longer our friend. You are no longer welcome among us!" Sokka was really starting to break down. Speak for yourself, I wanted to say. Leave him alone, I wanted to say. But I couldn't bring myself to. I saw Sokka raise his sword. Aang backed away. "Go. I won't hurt you if you just go." Aang was suddenly struck with grief and frustration. He put his hand to his glider. "Wait!" I yelled. I wouldn't let this happen again.
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ZIE
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Post by ZIE on Jun 29, 2008 22:10:09 GMT 1
It's interensting. its kinda hard to tell who's perspective it is from though. I liked it.
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◊Christina◊
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Post by ◊Christina◊ on Jun 29, 2008 22:19:14 GMT 1
Thanks. It is first from Katara's perspective, then it switches from Katara to Aang in each paragraph. Later on, it will be from other people's perspectives.
Should I write another chapter?
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Post by ZIE on Jun 29, 2008 22:26:39 GMT 1
si siniorita oui madamoiselle yes miss i know. im insane. The large amounts of caffine i had today arnt helping things either
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◊Christina◊
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Post by ◊Christina◊ on Jun 29, 2008 22:33:36 GMT 1
Why spanish and french? Wait... I do not respond to insaness just say if you want me to make another one dangit lol
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Post by ZIE on Jun 29, 2008 22:36:22 GMT 1
yes i wantyou to make another one.
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◊Christina◊
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Post by ◊Christina◊ on Jun 29, 2008 22:37:38 GMT 1
Only if you promise not to speak in other languages.
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Post by ᴃᴇᴇ♥ on Jun 29, 2008 22:38:23 GMT 1
Pourqoi tu parle francais??? ____________________________________________________ Anyways, Chistina, nice fanfics. Im so used to read fanfics that are MUCH longer than mine =) glad to see there's others who writes short stories =D... So nice work
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Post by ZIE on Jun 29, 2008 22:46:28 GMT 1
oh ok... after this
parsque je prend le francais a l'ecole.( i think that makes sence)
it means because i take french in school
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◊Christina◊
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Post by ◊Christina◊ on Jun 29, 2008 22:48:05 GMT 1
Well I don't care if you take french in school! Promise not to speak any more french! jkjkjkjkjkJKJKJKJK
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Post by ◊Christina◊ on Jun 29, 2008 23:43:28 GMT 1
The Revelation
"Katara, stop. Think of what he did", Sokka yelled. "Why would you-" Sokka stopped mid sentence. Toph grabbed him by the shoulder. "Leave her alone, you can't stop her.", Toph said. It began to rain.
"Stop! Please, I just want to talk to you, please!" I was yelling after Aang. I saw a look of sorrow and grief on his face. He began to decend, and finally landed. He earthbended a large shelter, it was raining pretty hard. He was faced in a corner. "I have lost everything, the war, my frie- no, my family, my bison, and", he suddenly turned around,"you." It was incredibly clear now. Her rejection to him on that evening... "Come, sit down", I said.
She had a look as if she was going to weep, but she did not. "After you left, we tried to lead an invasion on our own, after we attempted to free the others, of course. We failed terribly, and only Toph, Sokka, and I got out alive. We have lived in secrecy the last 8 years. The Firenation won the war", Katara said. She finally started to cry. I wanted to try and comfort her, but she seemed not to want anyone near. "After a week, I realised how much of a fool I had been. I went back to the Western Air Temple, but you were not there", I said. "That's about the time we went off for the invasion", Katara replied. "Sokka wanted to wait a week, then we would go off and..." she broke off. She stared away, thinking. She looked torwards me.
"What happened to you in those last 8 years?" I asked. He shook his head with a grieved expression. "I very much would not like to speak of it", he said. "I'm sorry, its just been so long", I was startled by some lightning,"Wow, that storm is really getting to be a little extreme", I continiued. I shivered. It was cold.
I heard footsteps at the base of the shelter. "Who's there?" I yelled. "You think you can just run off with this traitor? Katara, get back here. Say goodbye", it was Sokka. Katara stepped in. "Sokka, you don't know the whole-" "I think I know enough to not trust him. I think I know enough that my father and friends are dead. You don't-" I couldn't take this any longer. "Sokka, I never intended to leave for this long. I searched for you after a week and you were gone. I have been searching for you for 8 years. I am not going to lose you after all I've been through", I said. I looked very sternly at him, then relaxed. "What's done is done. Just let no more harm come to us from you". I looked at Sokka once more, then Toph, then Katara. "I am sorry."
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Post by ◊Christina◊ on Jun 30, 2008 0:06:27 GMT 1
The Stranger Approaches
There was a large crashing sound outside before anyone could say something. Except this time, it wasn't thunder. "C'mon, we'd better go check it out", I said. "Aang, Sokka, Toph, let's go." "Show yourself!" Sokka said. "My, my, look who it is. I thought I saw you out here", the stranger said. "Who are you?" I asked. They obviously knew who we were. "What, you don't recognize me? Just because the war is over, doesn't mean I still wouldn't be hunting down the Avatar", they said. Aang seemed to recognize her. "Azula!" he said. "Guys, brace yourselves", he said as he tried to knock her over. She tried to fire at Toph, who had thrown a rock at her, but she immediately created a wall of earth. Sokka went in with his sword after the others tried to strike her with their bending, and it proved successful.
I had never expected to see Azula again. I didn't want to kill someone, especially not like this, but it was what had to be done. She was already on the ground, there was nothing that could be done. We all stepped in to look at her, and she immediately jumped up. She was still very deceptional.
We were all suprised. But I had just noticed it was a full moon. Azula was weaker, and I had the advantage over the others. I used the rainwater as my weapon. She was being overwhelmed by all of us, and she finally fell. This time, it was for real, though.
Azula was gone, but this was the beginning of something horrible. Even though the war was over, it still lived on.
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Post by ◊Christina◊ on Jun 30, 2008 2:30:53 GMT 1
The Truce of the Unfaithful
"What was that all about?" I asked. "Azula was a tricky one, she didn't have an excuse not to try and defeat me, even after all these years of shame", Aang replied. "Aang, I'm sorry about earlier, but, I really can't forgive you. I mean, I don't know why you ran away", Sokka looked at me for a second,"but for whatever reason, I still lost my dad, the battle, and alot of other people I cared about", Sokka said. "Sokka, I forgive you", Aang said,"and I am sorry for the horrible debt I now owe to you". "The void cannot be filled", Sokka said. "I'm going to get some rest. C'mon, Toph." "You guys go ahead, I think we have to talk about some things", I said. Sokka looked at me a bit suspiciously, then came to a look of understanding. Then, an almost mocking, or sarcastic look he used to get. He was on to something, but I didn't quite know what. "Okay, see you later", he said, and walked away.
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Post by ◊Christina◊ on Jun 30, 2008 2:35:09 GMT 1
Pourqoi tu parle francais??? ____________________________________________________ Anyways, Chistina, nice fanfics. Im so used to read fanfics that are MUCH longer than mine =) glad to see there's others who writes short stories =D... So nice work No, I do not speak french. Whoah, creepy, I can answer that without a translator! Also, for the thousandth time, MY NAME IS CHRISTINA NOT CHRISTIE NOT CHRISTY NOT CHISTIE NOT CHISTINA, BUT CHRISTINA
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