Post by Solid Snake on Jul 29, 2008 6:21:41 GMT 1
I should say that this is one of the longest ones I've made yet. It is also kinda dark in the sense of some of the diologue that is said. lastly, the story gets told from a different opint of view at one point. enjoy 
What a way to ruin the day. We finally come face to face with the deranged murder. I couldn’t see him obviously. “LET HER GO IMMEDIATELY”! I yelled. The lunatic didn’t respond. I had never felt so helpless until this moment. I could see what or where this psycho path was but I knew that if I didn’t do something or fight back Yue could have been killed. I gave it my best shot. I rushed in the direction I thought he was. (Laughing) “Wow that was really pathetic. Where were you going”? He asked. “Let her go”! I demanded. “Help…help…me”. I barely hear Yue’s voice. I stood up. “So you want to challenge me? Ok…now don’t move my dear we still have one more dance and I don’t want you finding another partner”. I could hear Yue being dropped to the ground. I tried to rush over to Yue but I was blocked by an ice wall.
“No, no, no…you wanted to play with me remember”. I stopped rubbing my face from hitting the ice wall. I stood up and turned my head. “Alright you psycho jerk, I’m going to get rid of you…big time”! I said sternly. I took a fighting stance and slowly walked around. “You should know that you are clearly out-classed here”. I didn’t care for his mind games. I probably should have planned out how I was going to attack him more thoroughly but I didn’t make time to think. I just want for it. As I charged forward I could hear his laughter and before I knew it I was being knocked back two times further. (Grunt) “Is that all you got”? I said. All that psycho path did was laugh. His laughter was annoying me. I got up slowly and re-took my fighting stance. Again I rushed towards him; again I was knocked back, this time much further and much harder. “Wow; now either you’re a really lousy fighter or you’re a really lousy fighter and blind”. I got up much slower and holding my left side. It felt like a hit a rock. The spot I was holding felt wet, looks like he drew some blood.
I got back up to my feet once again. “Yeah I’m blind…can’t take a guy down who can’t see? (Spit) You’re the one who’s pathetic”. I said painfully. Once again he laughed. As I stood up I couldn’t help thinking what happened to Yue. “Yue”! I yelled. “She’s fine…just kept her out of the picture for a while”. He said with a smug sound in his voice. “If you hurt her in any way”…Before I could finish; “please if I wanted to killer her I would have done it back at her cabin”. Did he really just say that I thought. “Heck; if I wanted to kill you I would have done it when you were passed out on the road but, to be fair I thought some one already had the fun”. “You’ve been following us…me for that long? What do you want”? I questioned. He just laughed and laughed. “What are you looking for”? He asked. I froze for a bit. “I think I know” He said. “You don’t know anything”. I said. Once again he laughed. “Well I know that there are no benders at The Southern Water Tribe, and maybe you’re looking for…The Avatar”? He said slyly.
I could believe what I just heard. “Why are you looking for The Avatar”? I asked. “Same reason you are. I want to capture him…or her”. He said. “We don’t want to capture them, just help them”. I said “Yeah, yeah, yeah…you want to help them save the world. The world is already doomed and when I find the avatar so are they”. The sicko laughed. “You won’t find the avatar before us”. I said sternly. The lunatic didn’t respond. I slowly made my way towards him again. I had my teeth bearing and my fist clenched not just to seem intimidating but, I was also in a lot of pain. “You want to hear a story”? He said. I didn’t respond. “I was walking through the same village you walked through the night before. No one there had a smile on their face. What a sight to see. I was the only person smiling; kind of like now. So I walked up to the merchant and asked for some food. No I demanded food. He turned around looking so angry and I was so…cheerful. He said that he was closed. I just stood there in front of him smiling…see just like now. He then went on and said to take a hike because he wasn’t going to give me any food, which then he reminded me of my brother. I hated my brother. So I looked straight into his eyes and told him a story; I like stories. For that story to be told properly I had to stop him form leaving; you know how some people are so rude I think you stories are boring , then they just get up and leave. I gouged his neck with an ice dagger and told him my story. He stared to bleed profusely all over my hand; how rude huh? Then when I was finished he looked at me without a smile on his face. So I decided to help him with that. I stared from his left ear then went to his mouth and back up to his right ear”. He said so smug and proud.
I stopped moving and stood with my mouth open at the horrible tale that I was just told. “When I find the avatar I hope he smiles to, but I can help with that”. He said. After that horrific comment he stared to laugh loud. As he continued to laugh louder and louder, I just started to get angrier and angrier, before I knew it the adrenaline was flowing in my body and I just charged him with everything I got. As I got closer to him I could hear a faint sound. That didn’t matter, by the time I knew it my right fist connected with his face. I was amazed that I landed a punch. “You are a crafty one my dear…I will have to keep my eye on you”. He said. “Yeah…and I’m canceling our dance date”. Yue said. I felt a huge sigh of relief after hearing Yue’s voice again. “You really have to be careful; he was just about to stab you”. Yue said. Afterwards she ran over beside me.
The psycho path started to again laugh. “You two really think you can beat me!? Look where we are…beside the ocean. There is moisture around us…if I wanted to I could turn the moist air into thousands of ice spears and impale you”. He proclaimed. “What should we do now”? Yue asked. “How did you escape…if you did”? I asked. “I’ll tell you after”. Yue said quickly and she threw her boomerang; I know because the sound it made. “Oh no”! Yue said. Again the crazed psycho laughed. It just made me madder and madder. I could stand to hear him laugh again so I charged forward hoping to land another right jab. “No wait” Yue yelled. I didn’t listen; the only thing on my mind was getting rid of this guy. As I raced towards him I found my self slowing down until I just stopped. I put my head down and felt my stomach area. As I touched the long jagged ice, I felt my body being lifted off the ground and pulled forward. “You see…that’s why blind people don’t fight”. After that I was hurled into the water.
I watched in horror as his body was thrown into the ocean by the murderer. I dropped to my knees and felt a single tear run down my face. I looked at him and he turned his head back to my direction and laughed. The water behind him was moving like the tentacles of an octopus and there were ice spears floating and circulating in the air. He slowly walked over to me smiling and throwing back and fourth an ice dagger. He stopped and stood in front of me. I looked up and then he grabbed me by my throat. “You look sad. Well I can change that. I’ll tell you a story”. Before he could continue the ice spears rushed behind him and the water tentacles dropped to the ocean bed. We both stared out to the water. “Ok no that was rude. Anyways; where were we…oh yes I was beginning my story” Before the psycho could continue the water rose. It rose in the shape of a head. Then an arm then a body, it was a giant water monster and in the middle was him. The spear was no longer in him and…his eyes…they were glowing…it was the avatar state. “Well, well, well, I would have never pegged you as the avatar…this is an interesting turn of events”. He said. The lunatic released his hand from my throat and positioned himself in front him. Then the psycho shaped a long spear and threw it towards him, but he dodged the spear by dropping towards the earth and fissuring the ground. The earth quaked up to and underneath the psycho’s feet hurling him into the air. As he flew through the air he laughed. The “avatar” caught him with a water tentacle and propelled him self upward via a water typhoon surrounding his lower body. He caught him in the air and brought him close. The psycho laughed and said “You just might be the avatar”. Before he could continue the “avatar” spun around until there was no more water to hold him in the air and threw him far out of sight. After he gracefully landed back to earth in front of me I went to touch him, then he turned around quickly. His eyes glowed blue and the veins in his arms were glowing. He had such and angry look on his face, it was scary. I fell back and fright. The “avatar” dropped to his knees and I rush to grab him. His eyes were still glowing, and then they stopped. Before he passed out he said “My…name…is…Kaio”.
Until next time…….
What a way to ruin the day. We finally come face to face with the deranged murder. I couldn’t see him obviously. “LET HER GO IMMEDIATELY”! I yelled. The lunatic didn’t respond. I had never felt so helpless until this moment. I could see what or where this psycho path was but I knew that if I didn’t do something or fight back Yue could have been killed. I gave it my best shot. I rushed in the direction I thought he was. (Laughing) “Wow that was really pathetic. Where were you going”? He asked. “Let her go”! I demanded. “Help…help…me”. I barely hear Yue’s voice. I stood up. “So you want to challenge me? Ok…now don’t move my dear we still have one more dance and I don’t want you finding another partner”. I could hear Yue being dropped to the ground. I tried to rush over to Yue but I was blocked by an ice wall.
“No, no, no…you wanted to play with me remember”. I stopped rubbing my face from hitting the ice wall. I stood up and turned my head. “Alright you psycho jerk, I’m going to get rid of you…big time”! I said sternly. I took a fighting stance and slowly walked around. “You should know that you are clearly out-classed here”. I didn’t care for his mind games. I probably should have planned out how I was going to attack him more thoroughly but I didn’t make time to think. I just want for it. As I charged forward I could hear his laughter and before I knew it I was being knocked back two times further. (Grunt) “Is that all you got”? I said. All that psycho path did was laugh. His laughter was annoying me. I got up slowly and re-took my fighting stance. Again I rushed towards him; again I was knocked back, this time much further and much harder. “Wow; now either you’re a really lousy fighter or you’re a really lousy fighter and blind”. I got up much slower and holding my left side. It felt like a hit a rock. The spot I was holding felt wet, looks like he drew some blood.
I got back up to my feet once again. “Yeah I’m blind…can’t take a guy down who can’t see? (Spit) You’re the one who’s pathetic”. I said painfully. Once again he laughed. As I stood up I couldn’t help thinking what happened to Yue. “Yue”! I yelled. “She’s fine…just kept her out of the picture for a while”. He said with a smug sound in his voice. “If you hurt her in any way”…Before I could finish; “please if I wanted to killer her I would have done it back at her cabin”. Did he really just say that I thought. “Heck; if I wanted to kill you I would have done it when you were passed out on the road but, to be fair I thought some one already had the fun”. “You’ve been following us…me for that long? What do you want”? I questioned. He just laughed and laughed. “What are you looking for”? He asked. I froze for a bit. “I think I know” He said. “You don’t know anything”. I said. Once again he laughed. “Well I know that there are no benders at The Southern Water Tribe, and maybe you’re looking for…The Avatar”? He said slyly.
I could believe what I just heard. “Why are you looking for The Avatar”? I asked. “Same reason you are. I want to capture him…or her”. He said. “We don’t want to capture them, just help them”. I said “Yeah, yeah, yeah…you want to help them save the world. The world is already doomed and when I find the avatar so are they”. The sicko laughed. “You won’t find the avatar before us”. I said sternly. The lunatic didn’t respond. I slowly made my way towards him again. I had my teeth bearing and my fist clenched not just to seem intimidating but, I was also in a lot of pain. “You want to hear a story”? He said. I didn’t respond. “I was walking through the same village you walked through the night before. No one there had a smile on their face. What a sight to see. I was the only person smiling; kind of like now. So I walked up to the merchant and asked for some food. No I demanded food. He turned around looking so angry and I was so…cheerful. He said that he was closed. I just stood there in front of him smiling…see just like now. He then went on and said to take a hike because he wasn’t going to give me any food, which then he reminded me of my brother. I hated my brother. So I looked straight into his eyes and told him a story; I like stories. For that story to be told properly I had to stop him form leaving; you know how some people are so rude I think you stories are boring , then they just get up and leave. I gouged his neck with an ice dagger and told him my story. He stared to bleed profusely all over my hand; how rude huh? Then when I was finished he looked at me without a smile on his face. So I decided to help him with that. I stared from his left ear then went to his mouth and back up to his right ear”. He said so smug and proud.
I stopped moving and stood with my mouth open at the horrible tale that I was just told. “When I find the avatar I hope he smiles to, but I can help with that”. He said. After that horrific comment he stared to laugh loud. As he continued to laugh louder and louder, I just started to get angrier and angrier, before I knew it the adrenaline was flowing in my body and I just charged him with everything I got. As I got closer to him I could hear a faint sound. That didn’t matter, by the time I knew it my right fist connected with his face. I was amazed that I landed a punch. “You are a crafty one my dear…I will have to keep my eye on you”. He said. “Yeah…and I’m canceling our dance date”. Yue said. I felt a huge sigh of relief after hearing Yue’s voice again. “You really have to be careful; he was just about to stab you”. Yue said. Afterwards she ran over beside me.
The psycho path started to again laugh. “You two really think you can beat me!? Look where we are…beside the ocean. There is moisture around us…if I wanted to I could turn the moist air into thousands of ice spears and impale you”. He proclaimed. “What should we do now”? Yue asked. “How did you escape…if you did”? I asked. “I’ll tell you after”. Yue said quickly and she threw her boomerang; I know because the sound it made. “Oh no”! Yue said. Again the crazed psycho laughed. It just made me madder and madder. I could stand to hear him laugh again so I charged forward hoping to land another right jab. “No wait” Yue yelled. I didn’t listen; the only thing on my mind was getting rid of this guy. As I raced towards him I found my self slowing down until I just stopped. I put my head down and felt my stomach area. As I touched the long jagged ice, I felt my body being lifted off the ground and pulled forward. “You see…that’s why blind people don’t fight”. After that I was hurled into the water.
I watched in horror as his body was thrown into the ocean by the murderer. I dropped to my knees and felt a single tear run down my face. I looked at him and he turned his head back to my direction and laughed. The water behind him was moving like the tentacles of an octopus and there were ice spears floating and circulating in the air. He slowly walked over to me smiling and throwing back and fourth an ice dagger. He stopped and stood in front of me. I looked up and then he grabbed me by my throat. “You look sad. Well I can change that. I’ll tell you a story”. Before he could continue the ice spears rushed behind him and the water tentacles dropped to the ocean bed. We both stared out to the water. “Ok no that was rude. Anyways; where were we…oh yes I was beginning my story” Before the psycho could continue the water rose. It rose in the shape of a head. Then an arm then a body, it was a giant water monster and in the middle was him. The spear was no longer in him and…his eyes…they were glowing…it was the avatar state. “Well, well, well, I would have never pegged you as the avatar…this is an interesting turn of events”. He said. The lunatic released his hand from my throat and positioned himself in front him. Then the psycho shaped a long spear and threw it towards him, but he dodged the spear by dropping towards the earth and fissuring the ground. The earth quaked up to and underneath the psycho’s feet hurling him into the air. As he flew through the air he laughed. The “avatar” caught him with a water tentacle and propelled him self upward via a water typhoon surrounding his lower body. He caught him in the air and brought him close. The psycho laughed and said “You just might be the avatar”. Before he could continue the “avatar” spun around until there was no more water to hold him in the air and threw him far out of sight. After he gracefully landed back to earth in front of me I went to touch him, then he turned around quickly. His eyes glowed blue and the veins in his arms were glowing. He had such and angry look on his face, it was scary. I fell back and fright. The “avatar” dropped to his knees and I rush to grab him. His eyes were still glowing, and then they stopped. Before he passed out he said “My…name…is…Kaio”.
Until next time…….
