Zukoisabeast
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Post by Zukoisabeast on Jan 1, 2009 6:11:02 GMT 1
I thought you were going to do that Smash bros. thing?
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Teяa253
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Post by Teяa253 on Jan 1, 2009 6:35:14 GMT 1
I probably will... not sure.
but yeah, I've never really had a huge birthday party ever...
~Katara~
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Post by Zukoisabeast on Jan 1, 2009 7:16:22 GMT 1
I had one at discovery zone one year.
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Post by Teяa253 on Jan 1, 2009 9:28:03 GMT 1
sweet.
I mean, it's not like I don't have fun on my birthday, it's just that I don't have parties...
~Katara~
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Post by Zukoisabeast on Jan 1, 2009 9:42:37 GMT 1
most of the time, it's with family
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Post by Teяa253 on Jan 1, 2009 9:50:18 GMT 1
yeah, same here.
~Toph~
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Post by Zukoisabeast on Jan 1, 2009 10:00:46 GMT 1
luckily, my family can cook
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Post by Teяa253 on Jan 1, 2009 10:10:38 GMT 1
ooh... so can mine...
my mom always makes me[us] this awesome dessert called lemon fluff cake and omg it's so good...
~Tera~
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Post by Zukoisabeast on Jan 3, 2009 23:55:40 GMT 1
my grandpa makes the bast red velvet cake(my favorite) and my mom makes this crawfish pasta that is outta this world.
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Post by Teяa253 on Jan 4, 2009 0:23:11 GMT 1
mmm... that DOES sound good...
~Katara~
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Post by Windgale on Jan 4, 2009 18:37:36 GMT 1
For some reason, i'm commenting w/o reading the actual chapter but.. ye.....so let me do this:
oomfg stuff wrong!
still good chapter. xD
Sorry, but even i'm finding the lameness pattern. you probably just think my comments are annoying anyway. -_-;
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Post by Teяa253 on Jan 4, 2009 18:45:08 GMT 1
this one was...
other than that though, they've been constructive criticism, something that I greatly appreciate.
~Tera~
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Post by Windgale on Jan 4, 2009 18:49:04 GMT 1
Ok.. gimme a minute. let me re-respond to some stuff then i'll actually read this one.
There was something else i was going to say, but i had a coughing fit and now i forget...
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Post by Teяa253 on Jan 4, 2009 18:58:26 GMT 1
well, whenever you remember...
~Katara~
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Post by Windgale on Jan 4, 2009 19:29:41 GMT 1
Innaproprite quotaion mark xD
As they left, Taki was having a word with the captain about it.” (<--- random)
M?
“but I myself m no bender, and I doubt very many of these refugees are in fighting condition.”
This has got to be my favorite quote ever:
“Alright then,” said Koara calmly, “prepare to meet death in some unpleasant ways then.”
If he's shouting, shouldn't their be an exclamation point?
“Malak,” Maric shouted
I have a feeling that you're very good at writing battle scenes, though you hide it from your non-explict versions. I thin kyou shoudl try to work on making better battle scenes without going to far that they're explict. Yuo know what i mean?
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