Post by nicole0deon on Jan 2, 2008 1:25:08 GMT 1
i thought of this while i was awake at 3:00 in the morning because my dog kept barking and i couldnt sleep. this is as much as i got so far. its like a follow up the the western air temple. and this is my first fanfic ever so be nice 
this is version 2. i edited this a lot from the first version. it didnt come out like i wanted it too. so i changed it. its still the same basic concept. and i have the same ending in mind. hopefully its seems better and less confusing. enjoy
ps. i didnt intend any shipping. so if its leaning one way then oops. lol
katara lay awake and listened to the sound of the group sleeping. sokka was snoring, aang was mumbling, and toph was flopping all over like a fish. the gaang was all sleeping near each other while zuko was in a seperate room. they were still wary of him.
as katara thought of zuko, she remembered what had happened in ba sing se. he had tricked her, messed with her emotions while she was vulnerable. she pulled her blanket over her head to hide herself from her shame. then she remembered aang as he was struck by azula's lightning. she felt her stomach clench and she wanted to puke, but then she remembered where she was. her eyes started to close and she fell asleep.
katara shot up in her bed. had the others not heard? there were footsteps and giggling and a voice. she layed back down figuring it was a dream. she heard the footsteps again. this time she got up to investigate. she tiptoed past the gaang to where the noise origionated from. she passed zukos room and looked inside. he was looking at a picture of a beautiful woman. who was that, katara wondered? she had stopped at his doorway almost unconsciously. she heard the noise again.
she saw what made the noise. mai and ty lee were arguing in hushed voices. ty lee was giggling and pointing to where zuko slept. mai was mumbling something looking depressed, as always. why would they be here without azula?
a hand grasped katara's throat from behind. a hand was held in front of her face to let her know who it was. as if she didnt already know. there were blue sparks coming from the fingers.
"you are going to wake the avatar. tell him i'm here but do not tell him we saw you," azula glanced at mai, still clenching katara's throat,"wake zuzu while your at it."
katara gasped for air. azula shoved her away towards where aang was. katara took a few steps forward and then turned around. she glanced at azula considering her chances at a fight. she was clearly outnumbered, but if she stays aways from ty lee she might have a chance...
as if reading her mind, azula said to her,"and dont even think about trying to fight. i will shoot you down the moment you turn around."
katara pushed the hate out of her mind. control yourself, she thought, the last thing aang needs is you dead. he has enough to worry about. katara heard azula whisper something behind her.
"ty lee. i need you to follow that waterbender scum and make sure she does what i say. if she doesnt.. well you know what to do," azula had said.
katara reached where the gaang was sleeping. she knelt down beside aang and gave him a little shake. "aang," she whispered,"aang!" he cracked his eye open. "katara..what is it?" he said while yawning. "its azula. she's here.i think she wants to hurt you." katara sounded scared, so aang knew she wasnt kidding. he opened his eyes fully and hopped up out of his sleeping bag.
"what do you want to do?" katara asked him. he looked at her and she knew what he was going to say. "i'm tired of running, katara. i need to face azula, once and for all. you knew this would happen one day," he said.
katara knew there was no convincing him otherwise. with that, they both knelt down to wake the others.
i'm getting a little writers blocked. more later!
this is version 2. i edited this a lot from the first version. it didnt come out like i wanted it too. so i changed it. its still the same basic concept. and i have the same ending in mind. hopefully its seems better and less confusing. enjoy
ps. i didnt intend any shipping. so if its leaning one way then oops. lol
katara lay awake and listened to the sound of the group sleeping. sokka was snoring, aang was mumbling, and toph was flopping all over like a fish. the gaang was all sleeping near each other while zuko was in a seperate room. they were still wary of him.
as katara thought of zuko, she remembered what had happened in ba sing se. he had tricked her, messed with her emotions while she was vulnerable. she pulled her blanket over her head to hide herself from her shame. then she remembered aang as he was struck by azula's lightning. she felt her stomach clench and she wanted to puke, but then she remembered where she was. her eyes started to close and she fell asleep.
katara shot up in her bed. had the others not heard? there were footsteps and giggling and a voice. she layed back down figuring it was a dream. she heard the footsteps again. this time she got up to investigate. she tiptoed past the gaang to where the noise origionated from. she passed zukos room and looked inside. he was looking at a picture of a beautiful woman. who was that, katara wondered? she had stopped at his doorway almost unconsciously. she heard the noise again.
she saw what made the noise. mai and ty lee were arguing in hushed voices. ty lee was giggling and pointing to where zuko slept. mai was mumbling something looking depressed, as always. why would they be here without azula?
a hand grasped katara's throat from behind. a hand was held in front of her face to let her know who it was. as if she didnt already know. there were blue sparks coming from the fingers.
"you are going to wake the avatar. tell him i'm here but do not tell him we saw you," azula glanced at mai, still clenching katara's throat,"wake zuzu while your at it."
katara gasped for air. azula shoved her away towards where aang was. katara took a few steps forward and then turned around. she glanced at azula considering her chances at a fight. she was clearly outnumbered, but if she stays aways from ty lee she might have a chance...
as if reading her mind, azula said to her,"and dont even think about trying to fight. i will shoot you down the moment you turn around."
katara pushed the hate out of her mind. control yourself, she thought, the last thing aang needs is you dead. he has enough to worry about. katara heard azula whisper something behind her.
"ty lee. i need you to follow that waterbender scum and make sure she does what i say. if she doesnt.. well you know what to do," azula had said.
katara reached where the gaang was sleeping. she knelt down beside aang and gave him a little shake. "aang," she whispered,"aang!" he cracked his eye open. "katara..what is it?" he said while yawning. "its azula. she's here.i think she wants to hurt you." katara sounded scared, so aang knew she wasnt kidding. he opened his eyes fully and hopped up out of his sleeping bag.
"what do you want to do?" katara asked him. he looked at her and she knew what he was going to say. "i'm tired of running, katara. i need to face azula, once and for all. you knew this would happen one day," he said.
katara knew there was no convincing him otherwise. with that, they both knelt down to wake the others.
i'm getting a little writers blocked. more later!
, and the details started out really well...until Katara randomly started crying on Zuko. The best writer makes all his or her scenes believable...
. You have the potential to be an EXCELLENT storyteller^^.
