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Post by xxtophfanxx on Jan 29, 2008 23:53:46 GMT 1
there's a little more for ya'
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Post by Dogg450 on Jan 30, 2008 1:08:15 GMT 1
So Whens the next part???
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Jan 30, 2008 3:50:13 GMT 1
Soon i guess maybe tonight if i can get my thoughts strait
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Post by katara279momo on Jan 30, 2008 21:22:17 GMT 1
WOW i love the story keep it up
Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Jan 30, 2008 23:03:27 GMT 1
thank you. i will as long as i can but it is gonna end soon.
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Post by Dogg450 on Jan 31, 2008 6:01:52 GMT 1
So do you know when the next part is?
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Jan 31, 2008 23:04:42 GMT 1
soon
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Post by Dogg450 on Feb 1, 2008 2:43:34 GMT 1
Okay *sighs* *sits on a chair* *waits* *sighs* *waits*
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Feb 1, 2008 23:20:35 GMT 1
i'd better get the part out befor someone *looks at dogg450* eats my head off.
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Post by Dogg450 on Feb 2, 2008 17:16:57 GMT 1
*looks at xxtophfanxx * *laughs nervously* Sorry:)
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Post by Dogg450 on Feb 2, 2008 17:37:13 GMT 1
I will Leave you alone sorry!!  |
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Feb 3, 2008 2:12:36 GMT 1
no it's okay. i realy should get the next part up.
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Feb 3, 2008 2:31:04 GMT 1
well he're some of it.
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"Why zuko?" she asked throwing a stiletto.
"I had to leave, the Firelord needs to go down" i tried to explain.
"What about the letter? You said you would always love me." she yelled back throwing another stiletto.
"And i do love you, but for the sake of the world-" she interupted me.
"i seem to recall you saying i was your world." she said accusingly. and throwing 3 more stilettos.
"Look i'm on your side." i said.
"no your on the opposite side" she yelled back.
"forget the war" i said.
"How can i forget when that's what brought us apart?" she asked hands down.
i walked up to her, and put my hand on her shoulder.
"i'll join your side as long as you join mine first" i said
she looked up.
"i don't want to be on anyones side." she said back.
"Please help me help you." i said.
"What?" she asked.
"Join the Avatar's side and you won't be on the losing one." i said.
she was silent. then "i don't know if i could let azula down like that."
"She'll get over it." i said
"okay" sha said back to me "i'll join"
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"What about our destiny?" i asked tears comming to my eyes.
he was silent for a long time thinking. he was begining to lose the battle to survive. kiss him
we sat stairing into eachothers eyes until i bent down and kissed him. we pulled apart and i aksed "so are you going to fight with me.?"
"yes, i have found that my destiny has suddenly changed."
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stupid girl with the stupid poking and the stupid jumping
she was right behind me. i sent a good hard punch at her stomach, she dodged it by jumping back. i sent a rock up at her, zuko and mai were approching fast from wherever they had continued their fight. didn't he know we were suppost to protect this door? stupid firebenders soka shifted ti lee jumped for me and imoblized me. as i fell i heard yell from sokka. then someone ran with heavy steps. someone yelled, then all was silent.
"What happened?" i yelled feeling a sting in my stomach.
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Toph fell to te ground. my whole stomach turned upsidown.
"Noooooo" i yelled. i won't let this happen again. Azula was about to strike toph with blue lightning. Zuko and Mai came around the corner.
zuko jumped in front of azula and grabbed her hand. they both yelled terrible ear pearcing screams then fell. some lightning escaped to somewhere.
i couldn't move. Ti lee rusked over to azula, mai rushed over to zuko. i knew i had to do something, but what? to toph, to zuko, or to get Katara?
"What happened?" Toph yelled. i looked over to her. The lightning had hit her stomach.
"Do something" Mai screamed. "he's dieing." tears were dripping down her cheaks.
"Sokka what happened to my stomach?" toph screamed.
"i think some lightning hit it." i yelled back.
Azula stood up, staggered then opened the door to Katara and Aang.
"What was that?" toph asked. i rushed over to her. Her stomach was bad, but not as bad as it could have been. it and part of her right arm was scorched, but i think it was just the top layer of skin.
"that was a night mare come true." i said gravely.
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"good, just hold on, i'm going to freaze your body then rapidly heat up the ice. that should heal what ever damage you have." i said, hoping this would work.
"ok" he answered weakly. i bent some water around him as sokka screamed. i froze. looking to the door. two people screamed, then complete silence.
i froze the water around Aang quickly. no telling what was going to happen now.
the door bust open and azula surrounded me in a ring of fire.
"Aang!" i yelled
"Katara" he yelled back. "Azula, don't hurt her." he yelled. she only smiled and made the ring smaller.
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"What happened? why is everything so quiet?" she asked. she was freaking out.
"Azula shot lightning at you, but--" I started until she yelled
"She shot lightning at me? how could she? am i gonna die? bring me to katara." she was yelling out until i said
"BUT, zuko blocked it...wll some of it. then Azula got up and went into the room where katara and Aang are fighting the Fire lord."
"well go fight with them." she said.
"i can't just leave you here your hurt." i said.
"i'll be fine, go help them, they need you more then i do." she countered back. tears were dripping from her eyes.
"you won't be okay. you have no idea what condition you are in." i said.
"I thought you said it wasn't so bad." she countered.
"Toph, so many people have died in my life that i loved. i won't let that happen to you."
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"i would suggest you don't move." azula said her ring still around me.
"What do you want?" Aang asked he was still frozen, why would i freeze him on a battle feild anyway? how could i be so stupid?
"i wanted you to become my prisoner. but now that you are i think an exicution is in order." she said. great what now? "any last words?" she asked. she's toying with us. Wait. it's the blue moon. i wonder if i could still blood bend.
"is it still night time?" i asked. the flames coming closer by the second.
"yes i beleive it is, why do you ask?" she wondered. Aang looked over to me. there was no way he was strong enough to bend the water off of him. i started to move my arms. she froze in place, stiffened up. i felt the unwanted flow of her energy and my energy colliding and becoming one.
"you fool" she said. "don't you remember our little wager?" she asked me.
"What wager?" Aang asked.
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she was silent for a moment.
"I am not going to die sokka." she said in a whisper.
"i know your lying toph." i said back.
"look snoozles, wether you stay with me ore not it won't mater you can't do anything to help, but katara and Aang they need you, you can help, but as for me," tears started flowing more intensly, her voice fell to a whisper "i'm a lost cause." i staired at her for a moment.
"your not a lost cause to me" i said. then i did what i never thought i would do, i kissed her. even this morning i hadn't looked to her that way. it took me this long to realize how i felt.
she looked up to me and smiled, blushing a deep red. she stayed there, "go sokka, they need you more then i do. and at least i know you care now." she seemed to freeze. she was faiding. the only thing that i could do was pray katara wasn't hurt.
"i will kill you azula." i said to myself.
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Post by xxtophfanxx on Feb 3, 2008 2:31:50 GMT 1
and there it is.
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Post by Dogg450 on Feb 3, 2008 3:31:12 GMT 1
Nice. is this part about Zuko and Mai?
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