The cycle continues

[Ilovethisshow]

was that sarcastic?

[Teяa253]

I don't think it was. I know Orophin too well. I think he was agreeing with you. I thought it was logical, and would have said the same thing, but I forgot.
~Aang~

[Orophin]

Of course that wasn't sarcasm!

You would be able to tell if it was sarcasm!

And yes, I was agreeing with you, ilovethisshow.

[Ilovethisshow]

sory, i'm bad at telling if things are sarcastic or not in all seriousnes. thenks for agreeing!

[Muhaha VI]

Great story! Keep up the storyline and plot twists. I have nothing more to comment on. Well done!

[Teяa253]

yeah. well done. I like this nearly as much as the stories I write. (because naturally, everyone likes their own story the best)
but still, I obviously like it, otherwise I wouldn't post here as much.
~Toph~

[Orophin]

Neither would I!

Little Ozana has become very interesting to me...

[Ilovethisshow]

thanks, you just have so many possibilities with her.

here's another part.






“Come on, we’d better get into the tent Toph made, it’s getting pretty bad out here.” Katara yelled to me, she was barely audible over the wind.

“Okay” I yelled back, although I wasn’t quite ready to go. I had been learning more advanced beginer water bending, which actually was quite easy. We started running towards camp. The rain was turning into hail. This was strange weather. I bent the ice as I ran so as I couldn’t get hurt by it.

“This is weird!” I yelled to Katara. We were almost at the camp. Thank Agni.

“Not really” She said back.

“Where are we?” I asked.

“Close” she said.

“No I mean were in the colonies are we?”

“Your guess is as good as mine.”

We were probably at the very top. I had no idea we were this far away from the palace. We still needed to get moving though, because if I knew my mother correctly, even if she wanted me to stay out of the palace and free, she would still be on top of me the whole way if I didn’t lose her first. To tell you the truth I didn’t need my mother on top of me, it would make it that much harder to impress her.

We made it back to the camp. I made a door in the tent and walked in, with Katara right behind me.

“Hello!” Aang said in his always cheery way.

“Hi” I said back.

“So, how was practice?” Sokka asked.

“It was fine” I said.

“I wish I had my sword to practice…..heck I wish I had a sword to practice with. I’m pretty rusty.” He said.

“Yeah that must be a bummer.” I said back to him although I really didn’t care.

“Yep.” he said back. I was cold, and needed to dry off. Katara had already bent the water off of her. I tried to bend it off myself. It worked! I was pleased and so was Katara.

“She’s a really hard worker. And pretty good at Water bending too” she said.

“Not as good as you!” I said. Ugh I sounded just like a teachers pet with that remark.

“Thank you” she said back blushing a little. I don’t think it’s what I said, I think it’s how I said it.

“Teachers pet” Toph said happily.

“What’s that?” Aang asked.

“It’s when you have a little suck up who says things like Ozana just said.” Toph siad, “Wait did I just say that right?” she paused for a second. “Yup”

“No, Ozana is not a teachers pet.” Katara said. Sokka yawned.

“What time is it?” I asked Katara.

“Your guess is as good as mine.”

“You were gone for almost 7 hours” Sokka said.

“So it’s three in the afternoon?” I asked.

“Yep” Katara answered.

“What are we going to do for 5 hours?” I asked.

“Well, I need to eat.” Sokka said.

“There are some Banana’s over there.” Toph said pointing to the far end of the tent. She had made a huge one for all of us.

“That’s not food” Sokka grumbled as he walked over there to eat some. He walked back with half of the banana’s in his hands.

“I hope your going to share those” Katara said menacingly.

“Fine,” he mumbled angrily. We all grabbed a banana from him, leaving him with one.

“Okay, so now that we’ve split up the food, what now?” I asked.

“Let’s talk about the good ol’ times” Katara said.

“Okay” Aang said.

“Fine” I said, I didn’t want to hear a bunch of adults talk about the glory days. I guess it would be fine to get some history on them though, something to blackmail them.


hope you liked it.

[Teяa253]

It's funny how Sokka, Toph, and Katara have not changed at all.
Sokka' still blunt and funny, Katara's still the caring mother figure, and Toph's still rude and sarcastic.
great work.
~Sanaki~

[Ilovethisshow]

thanks, they can be really hard to keep in charecter.

[Orophin]

Another good installment, and Toph is still getting on Ozana's nerves.

Keep them coming, they're great!

[justafan]

dido, u make all the characters act like they would on the show, and i know form personal experience that isn't something that is simple to write, good job

[Orophin]

It is hard to make the characters seem real.

But you've pulled it off!

[Ilovethisshow]

Thanks Guys

[Orophin]

Well, it's true!