Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 27, 2008 4:43:59 GMT 1
okay this is the last part FOR TODAY take notice of the FOR TODAY part.
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Teяa253
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Post by Teяa253 on Feb 27, 2008 4:44:51 GMT 1
alrighty.... who's the other kid? ~Sokka~
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Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 27, 2008 5:20:33 GMT 1
Chapter 4
"My name is Aang" he said.
my jaw dropped, this could not possibly be the previous avatar. there was only one avatar on the whole planet i living form at a time. ever. that was the rule, that was the way.
aperantly Katara saw my jaw drop and added on, "this was our son" it all made sence now. they had had a son so she named him Aang.
"Well that makes sence." i said as we made it out of the palac's prison....which is poorly named because it was about twenty miles away from the actual palace. we traveled a distance into the woods, but not very far because no one could really walk very far...maybe except for Toph and i. we at least made it to a stream so Katara and maybe Aang could feel beter. they would be by water.
"Well does everyone want to go to sleep or should it be story time?" i asked.
"Well i'm pretty tiered, but i'd be fine with a little late night gossip" toph said.
"Okay well i guess i will tell you the story of the palce tomorrow then." i said
"Wait i just said i wanted to hear it tonight!" she yelled out.
"alright fine, but i warn you this is partialy about sokka" i said slyly. "oh and you probably already know it."
THE STORY
It had been 3 months since Aang had been struck with the green lightning from Ozia. this was a very slow and deadly attack. it was like venom. It would kill you slowly, usualy in 6 months. Thenig were getting bad, Aang was healing but there was little hope.
3 more months had passed, Katara was pregnant. Aang was Losing the battle to the deadly fire attack.
4 more months passed. Katara was at the firelords door, beggin for him to heal Aang. She had gotten in because Sokka had 'distracted' azula wh had taken a liking to him. The firelord refused, and Azula, without telling her father, did what she santed with sokka. She maried an unimportant governer to cover her 'mistake'. 9 months later Aang died and i was born at the same time.
BACK TO ME TALKING TO THEM
"And that i beleive is how i am the avatar."
"Well i didn't know sokka was....." Toph dragged off.
"Wow" Aang said. "So we're cousins?" he asked.
"Yes, and i am rightfully a waterbender." i said to him.
"Who told you this?" sokka asked quietly.
"i heard it in snippets and just had to put it all together." i said then added, "Father"
"That was a mistake" sokka said.
"I was a mistake...gee you've only known me for what an hour and already mom is winning the FAVORITE PARENT AWARD."
"you disrespectful little, little"
"Say it" I yelled, "SAY I AM JUST A LITTL SPIOLED TWIT THAT KNOWS NOTHING OF THE PAST" i yelled
"THAT'S ENOUGH" yelled Katara.
"DARN RIGHT," i yelled, "i'm going to bed." then i left and went of into the woods.
"She sure knows how to make a dramatic exit." Toph said.
"Azula's gotten to her, just like Ozia got to her." sokka said, "She is no daugter of mine"
"look we all just need a little rest." Katara reasoned.
"You just have to jump in when the fun is coming don't you?" Toph asked, walking a little away from the group. a few seconds later the group heard her yell "OH GROUND YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I HAVE MISSED YOU.....he he no offence trees"
they all went of into seperate area's and pretty soon i came back to the camp. i needed these people to help me become the avatar i was suppost to be. I needed them to help show my loyalty to my Grandfather.
next chapter: lower on the page.
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Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 27, 2008 5:21:36 GMT 1
Sorry that took a little longer then i thought it would. he he *Looks around for angry people* at least no one's chasing me.
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Teяa253
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Post by Teяa253 on Feb 27, 2008 5:38:54 GMT 1
*jaw drops* wow... you sure as hell know how to make Tera253-style plot twists. I'll be watching this thread. It seems to promise good things. ~Toph~
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Post by justafan on Feb 27, 2008 7:34:22 GMT 1
yea, this is a story worth reading
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Post by Orophin on Feb 27, 2008 8:05:31 GMT 1
How could I miss this!!!
Sorry I'm late, this Fanfic is amazing!!!
Plot twists at every turn!
I have bookmarked this thread, and I will be back.
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Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 27, 2008 14:04:25 GMT 1
*Blushes* Aw thanks. there will be more, i promise.
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Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 27, 2008 14:31:20 GMT 1
Here is a small amount coming.
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 27, 2008 14:51:36 GMT 1
Chapter 5 As i fell asleep some strange sensaion passed over me. i was in a different world. it was strange and scary but i had to hold my head up high. "It is just a dream" i said to myself over and over again. "Hi" someone behind me said. "ahh" i yelled from surpise. i turned around and saw a small monk about 12 with a blue arrow on his head "Hi i'm Aang" the boy said. "Hello Aang." i said. "i am--" he interupted me. "Ozana" he said. "Princess Ozana, mind you pesant" i said back "Wow you are defanatly Azula's daughter." he said "Is that a bad thing?" i asked. "Well, yes and no" he said. "How dare you insult me. die." i tryed to shoot lightning at h'when him, but nothing came out. He laughed a little then said when "we're in the spirit world there is no bending, and i" he disapeared from in front of me. "Am a spirit" he said reapearing behind me. "DON'T DO THAT" i yelled at him. he cowarded back, "Sorry" he said with a hurt look on his face. He was prety cute....in a 13 year old way. "Down to buisiness" he said. "Okay, Aang why did you bring me here?" i asked. "Well you are the next Avatar and you have to master the elements. you are doing a fine job with fire by the way, so water should be ptretty easy. you picked the perfect teacher" he said bluhing a little. he recomposed himself then said, "and you picked a good earthbending Teacher, she will teach you stuff that others can't" he said. "your only problem is an airbending teacher. there is an old man in the earth kingdom that knows the art of Airbending. but he is agout to die, so you probably will not make it in time." he screwed up his face and looked up, he was hinking. "Is that all?" i asked. "Wait i'm trying to remember what else i was supposed to tell you." he thought for a second. "ohh wait" he said. "i am in your mind and know what you are thinking at all times. if you go against my friends and family i will take over your body and will become you. you must uphold the avatar Honar, you must not go back to the royal family, IT WILL ONLY MEAN DISTRUCTION" he said then yelled the last part. "i will do what is best and nothing more or less" i said. "now can i please go?" i asked with desrperation. "yes, um, by now." he said then disapeared, or rather i disappeared. man i would not like being lost in that place. when i awoke everyone was staring at me. They all had horrid looks on their faces. "What?" i asked. next chapter: avatar10.proboards91.com/index.cgi?board=fanfiction&action=display&thread=1811&page=3
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Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 27, 2008 14:52:39 GMT 1
yeah i know pretty short and untwistful. there will be more later today though.
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Post by imabigfanofiroh on Feb 27, 2008 16:45:30 GMT 1
I thought it was mostly ok..... But It's a good start! ;D
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Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 27, 2008 22:44:19 GMT 1
What can i do to help it?
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Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 27, 2008 22:45:16 GMT 1
i know this may be a bit far fetched, but just read on.
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Post by justafan on Feb 27, 2008 23:11:24 GMT 1
yea its a small, but fun to read. its alright
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