Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 28, 2008 5:21:46 GMT 1
That's all for tonight (sorry it's pretty late) there will be more tomorrow.
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Post by Teяa253 on Feb 28, 2008 5:26:06 GMT 1
I like it. hey! grammar improved! BTW, you don't need to post 3 times in a row (unless you have 3 chapters). you can modify your original post(s) ~Katara~
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Post by justafan on Feb 28, 2008 6:35:09 GMT 1
tht was good
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Post by Orophin on Feb 28, 2008 12:30:04 GMT 1
Yeah, really good.
Now we get to see Toph training the stuck up little Fire Nation ex-princess/Avatar!
This should be fun to watch......
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 28, 2008 14:49:29 GMT 1
Chapter 9:
alright i will stop triple posting like i had been doing before. sorry hehe
“Alright so I suppose we will start with the basics such as stances mechanics….”I let my voice trail off expecting her to praise me for my knowledge of bending.
“Actually,” she said mater of factly, “We are going to start by moving a rock” she said pushing me.
“Don’t pu--” I started until I remembered our talk before, “Sorry” I said.
“That’s right you are sorry.” she said. “now go next to that rock.” she said pointing to a rock strait in front of us.
“Well I knew that” I Mumbled under my breath.
“What was that?” she asked me, having all to much fun with this.
“I said I am blessed to be working with the Greatest Earthbender on the Planet.” I finished then added in my mind. ‘for now’
“That‘s what I thought you said. Now let‘s go steamy. Stop dawdling” she said.
“What Did you just call me?” I asked, getting a little mad.
“Steamy, now walk up to the rock. I can guarantee you it doesn’t bite.” she said.
“Of course it won’t bite. Rocks don’t have mouths. That’s not the point though you are calling me steamy. Why” I asked in desperation.
“Everyone has a nick name, and yours is steamy” she said, as if she was my Equal.
“Yes, but why steamy?” I asked.
“Well for two reasons” she started. “the first, your parents were from the Water Tribe and the Fire Nation and water and fire makes steam. Second off, you have a temper. That’s all that really needs to b said.”
“So your making fun of me?” I asked in as=n astonished tone.
“JUST GET TO THE ROCK” She yelled.
“Okay!” I said moving over there.
“Okay so this is how you move a rock.” she showed me a stance. “This is a horse stance” she said slapping her legs, “You need a strong stance to become a good Earthbender. Then all you do is punch out, you have to be strong and like a rock to be able to do any Earthbending at all.” she punched out and the rock slammed into the hill she had made. I decided to step in and created a rock(though a lot smaller then hers) for myself. “Wow someone was watching, good job Steamy, this should be a piece of cake.”
“I thought it was a rock” I said.
“Just move it” she said exasperated. I stood in a horse stance and punched at the rock. It went almost as far as hers.
“I DID IT” I yelled at the top of my lungs. I started jumping around until I found myself flying high above where I was before. “OH MY AGNI” I yelled, but not from the flying. I saw a battalion of hot air balloons with my mother leading them. Great another bad day. Next chapter: scroll down.
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Post by justafan on Feb 28, 2008 18:37:09 GMT 1
seems like a good interaction between them, i liked how toph hasn't grown up at all, lol
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Post by Orophin on Feb 29, 2008 1:13:15 GMT 1
Same old Toph...
But Azula is on her way, let's watch and see what happens next!
*Sits down patiently and expectantly*
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Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 29, 2008 1:52:46 GMT 1
Chapter 10:
The sensation of flying suddenly stopped when I saw my mother coming towards me. Two thigs happened at once. My stomach dropped and thoughts burst into my head. The first thought was I was happy to see her so I could show her what I learned and turn in the fugitives. Then I remembered I was a fugitive and they probably weren’t going to accept me back that easily.
So I panicked. As soon as I started to fall I worried about what she would do if she saw me. I incased myself in fire, or rather tried to. Something was lacking in the air and I couldn’t breath. I fell unconscious.
Minutes later I found myself eyelevel with my mother. She had a wicked smile and was following me with her eyes and finger. She wasn’t suppose to find me yet. I still needed to learn Earth and Airbending.
As soon as I landed I told toph what I saw.
“We have to get back to katara, sokka, and Aang” he said.
“Let’s go” I said back, we started to run over there. As soon as we got there she relayed the information to them.
“So what now?” Aang asked.
“I say I make us a bunker and we can hide out there.” Toph said back.
“Let’s do it.” I said back. She made a hole that we all jumped into. It wasn’t very big. I was tempted to make a fire but decided against it.
“They are right above us.” Toph whispered.
“Do something” Katara said.
Everyone else shushed her.
“What are they saying?” I asked.
“Azula is still in the balloon. There are soldiers above us they are marching around trying to find us. These aren’t regular soldiers though. One of them is a Di lee agent.” she was silent for a moment. It was all to silent. Then we popped out of the hole we were hiding in.
“Welcome avatar” my mother said, “How nice of you to join us.”
I cringed, this wasn’t suppose to happen until I could bend all of the elements and dispose of these people. I was about to have to do a lot of talking.
Next chapter: Behind you..Just kidding, scroll down.
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Post by justafan on Feb 29, 2008 3:22:51 GMT 1
mother-daughter fight coming up, wonder if zuko will show up in this
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Post by Orophin on Feb 29, 2008 4:03:12 GMT 1
How will Azula handle them now, I wonder...
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 29, 2008 4:33:40 GMT 1
Chapter 11: here you go sorry it's not what ya'al thought but this is how the story goes. “I thought you said Azula was in the balloon?” I asked furiously. “I haven’t felt her in 18 years, it’s not my fault she gained weight.” Toph said back. “Stop talking” My mother said to us. Earth was put around everyone’s hands except for toph who was fitted with steel. I had to think of what I was going to do to get away…that is until I could prove my worth. Then I decided, why not tell the truth. I was very careful about what I thought about that Aang might potentially see. We were being led to the Central Balloon. She was leading us all into one cell. “Wait, I need to talk to you” I yelled to her as she was about to throw me in. “Well?” she said after staring at me for a while. “Could we maybe talk alone?” I asked. “Very well.” she said. I hadn’t expected it to come this easily. I expected to fight with her about it then win in the end. “What is it?” she asked after pulling me into the hall. “I’m on the royal family’s side” I said. “I know you are” she said back to me. “Then why are you capturing me?” I asked her. “If I don’t capture you back your grandfather will be pissed off” she said, “and I want the throne” “Look, all you need to do is let me blast a hole through a this wall and I will be fine. Rocks aren’t going to hold me.” I was being sincere, but something in my gut told me she was not. “Very well. Do it after I tell that idiot over there to take you back to your cell. We are very close to home. Besides the avatar would be a fine win for the fire nation, your grandfather doesn’t see that.” I was not expecting what had come out of her mouth. I knew she must have had some personal gain for this or else she would not let me go. She called over the soldier and walked away. As soon as she had turned the corner I let out a huge blast. Of lightning, killing him of course, and broke into the jail cell. “Come on and hurry.” I said. They followed me to a smaller air balloon and we were home free. All that was on my mind was, why the hell my mother would let us out that easily. There was no doubt that she was going to follow us to make sure I would live up to my promise and it was for personal gain, but what could she gain by keeping me alive and away from the palace. I just hoped it wouldn’t cause my destruction in the end. Next chapter: avatar10.proboards91.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=fanfiction&thread=1811&page=5
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Post by justafan on Feb 29, 2008 4:41:58 GMT 1
another short but fun to read bit
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Ilovethisshow
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Post by Ilovethisshow on Feb 29, 2008 4:50:47 GMT 1
i know, it sucked. i just had to do that small bit to make what happens next make sence. there will be more tomorrow.
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Post by Orophin on Feb 29, 2008 12:09:10 GMT 1
It didn't suck!
Now I am trying to think of what Azula wants, and I am coming up with the throne.
She wants to replace Ozai, and she doesn't want to wait forever.
That's what I think.
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Post by Teяa253 on Feb 29, 2008 19:37:07 GMT 1
haha, so Azula is on her own side then?
...interesting,... ~Azula~
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