The cycle continues

[Ilovethisshow]

Chapter 6:

I was standing about a foot away from katara, and she had a confused awed look on her face.

"Did you just do that?" Sokka asked. i looked over to him.

"Do what?" i asked starting to get a little woried.

"Kiss me" Katara said, touching her lips.

"What?" i asked.

"You just kissed me." she said. i thought about this for a moment.

"Very funny Guys" i said laughing. i looked at everyone for a second, and when no one started laughing i cringed on the inside. i started spitting and gagging and gasping for Air. everyone staired at me. a slight smile went across Toph's face.

i stopped gaging for a second and looked up at her. "What is so funny that you would laugh at the Princess?" i asked.

"Oh no what's the princess going to do to me?" she asked. "Kiss me?" she puckered her lips.

"I DIDN'T KISS KATARA" i yelled. i thought for a moment. "AANG I WILL KILL YOU" i yelled.

"W-What did i do?" Katara's Son Aang asked.

"NOT YOU" i yelled at him. "look Katara not that your not......pretty fo a, um, 30 somthing year old peasant who was trapped in a cell for 18 years, but i don't roll that way. So um yeah, i gotta go throw up." i said rushing into the woods. Everyone's Eyes followed me. Great two bd days in one week, Being the avatar isn't looking good at this point.

When i got back i saw everyone sitting in a tight circle. i walked up. "Hello i'm back" i said to them. they all up at looked at me. then turned back around so that i was excluded. i thought about this for a moment. i suppose i can't win these people over by being a royal...so i guess i should g down to their leval. maybe start over.

"Guys?" i said to them, they all looked at me. "i've realized what a jerk i'v been latley and i wanted to appologise and possibly start over." their eyes softened. "And sokka i um....let's start over too, it might have been to much for both of us to announce to you that i was your daugter, so why don't we start out as friends first." i said to him. he looked at me and stood up.

"No, i shouldn't have said those things about you, to you."he said. "We don't need to start over, but there are some things you need to learn."

"Like respect." Toph added, then spit on the ground next to her. i staired at her for a moment.

"Katara, Toph," i said then took a deep breath. "i would be honered if you were the ones to teach me bending." i took in noter breath. "Sokka i would be the happiest person on the whole planet if you were to give me another Chance." i thought for a moment and something came to my head. "Aang i have some exciting news for both of us. There is an Airbender on the other side of the used to be Earth kingdom. if we could hurry we could learn from him." i said finnishing.

All was silent for a couple seconds then katara said " i will teach you, But you have to be respectful to us all."

"Yeah Dito" Toph said.

"Wo hoo" i said, then added, "Thank you." in the front of my brain i was thinking i think i like these people, but in the dark depths that i knew not evan Aang could get to i was saying, you lead to your own Distruction.

naxt chapter: scroll down.

[eduante]

no offence, but could you detail it more. I can't fallow.

[Ilovethisshow]

okay dude will do.

[Ilovethisshow]

hope that helps.

[Ilovethisshow]

Chapter 7:

-my mother's talk with the firelord---right after i was taken away--

"So Azula,who was that guy that you fell in love with again?" Ozia asked my mother. she looked away "i seem to recall you saying that he was a respected Earth General. not a water tribe peasant." he yelled towards the end.

"Well the one i ended up marying was a respected earth general, He must have lied to me." she said back.

"NON-SENSE" he yelled to her. "It was that water peasant with the avatar wasn't it? Sona Soppa Soga," he started trying to remember the name. it's a wonder he eve knew it " Sojja, Sokka, SOKKA THAT WAS IT" he yelled to her. "YOU HAVE DISRESPECTED ME FOR THE LAST TIME." he said throwing a ball of fire into the Air. "YOU WILL BE PUNNISHED AS YOUR DAUGHTER" he yelled. he felt a slight rumbling in the ground.

"But firelord" she said to him.

"No Buts azula" he said, then there was a knock on the door. "NO NOW" he yelled.

"It-IT-it-it's important sir" said a tiny voice from the doorway

"WHAT?" he asked, a tiny soldier that was out of breath opened the doorway wider.

He said, "your grandaughter has escaped" he was huffing and puffing as he said this.

"WHAT, SHE ALREADY ESCAPED?" he asked. he shot a bolt of lightning killing the youg soldier easily. "You will find her. this is now your mess" he said to Azula.

"Yes sir" she said

"You will start tomorrow. She's not getting far without means of transportation."

next chapter: look down

[Teяa253]

My only suggestion for you wpould be to heigten the grammar skills other than that, I'm liking it.
~Toph~

[xxtophfanxx]

i like it so far, keep going

[Ilovethisshow]

do you mean spelling or vocabulary? or do you mean both

[Teяa253]

spelling and punctuation.
~Iroh~

[Orophin]

Yeah, same, but I can follow the story pretty well so far, so it doesn't concern me as much as it would if the story was bad.

This story is really good, I like the plot twists.

Keep going, just remember, you can take your time with these things.

[Ilovethisshow]

thanks for the advice, i ca't stand it sometimes because i am forever making mistakes. i will take it slower too.

thanks

[Teяa253]

wait... slower pace? you mean you're not going to post as often?
don't do that!
~Sanaki~

[justafan]

grammar isn't important, it is a good story

[Ilovethisshow]

alright don't get freaked out. i will continue posting as aften as i can. Don't worry.

in fact i am about to post another part right now

[Ilovethisshow]

Chapter 8:

“So when do we start?” I asked eager to speed this thing up.

“Well, I am a little weak right now” Katara said.

Toph cut in, “well I’m not. We could start when ever you get your act together, but there are some things you need to learn before I relay my knowledge upon you.”

“Cool” I said.

“The first thing is you can’t talk back to me.” she was leading me from the group to a quieter place further in the woods, “I’ve heard enough crap from you it will last a life time.”

“I will do that.” I said back to her.

“We are here.” she said.

“This is a place full of trees and weeds” I said to her.

“What did I just get through telling you?” she asked cuffing me in the back of the head. I wanted to say something back to her, but bit my tongue

“Sorry” I said back to her.

“Now watch as you see master Earthbending.” she said cracking her knuckles. I waited, and instead of just watching the rocks come up I watched her and her stances. I caught what rocks came up in what form in my peripheral vision. What I witnessed was very remarkable. A huge hill leapt out of the ground……..or rather we sunk in. the trees disappeared, and field was made for us to practice on.

“That was incredible.” I said awestruck

“Yeah I know” she said sounding proud. “and now we are ready for some Bending.

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